adventure Thirty Moons Under Ares: a My little pony film screenplay (revived)

[USMCav8r 106]

I just recently began watching MLP, and (while I am still very dubious about clippers) I have come to really enjoy the fandom.

 

I have recently started writing a screenplay for a hypothetical MLP movie. Come and check it out at the following link:

 

https://docs.google....dit?usp=sharing

 

I am posting this via google drive because I am constantly making updates, and so that you can see my latest updates at your convenience.

 

This screenplay is about peace, despite the name. I have actively avoided blood and gore, so that it is more acceptable to younger audiences, while still discussing the horrors of war and the strength of friendship. I am interested in any help I can get, either in the script, concept art, or music.

 

I also utilized several works of fan art as concept images, embedded in the text. If you recognize any as your own, please let me know so that I can appropriately cite you.

 

I am also hoping to get some help from Silly Filly Studios and other animators to try to make this movie a reality. If you have some ideas for the music, all help is appreciated.

 

Please keep any comments limited to constructive criticisms only. If you think I should make a change, post it in the comments either on this thread or on the google drive. I hope you enjoy.

 

-2nd LT Jeremy Truesdell

 

(If you want to see the pevious comments, here is the link:) http://mlpforums.com...y/#entry1989464

Edited November 13, 2013 by USMCav8r

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

Alright. I'm going to tell you now, the one thing that's throwing people is the fact that you posted the script in the thread. TMI. Keep it in the Google Doc. Set it to public (or people with the link), if you haven't already.

[USMCav8r 106]

Alright. I'm going to tell you now, the one thing that's throwing people is the fact that you posted the script in the thread. TMI. Keep it in the Google Doc. Set it to public (or people with the link), if you haven't already.

Thank you. I just deleted that portion of the thread. I submitted that portion as a reply, but the system treated it as an edit to the original post, so I had to go through the entire post and delete. Than god for the scroll wheel....

Alright. I'm going to tell you now, the one thing that's throwing people is the fact that you posted the script in the thread. TMI. Keep it in the Google Doc. Set it to public (or people with the link), if you haven't already.

Alright. I'm going to tell you now, the one thing that's throwing people is the fact that you posted the script in the thread. TMI. Keep it in the Google Doc. Set it to public (or people with the link), if you haven't already.

I also noticed your pic. Guess you like the Martians huh? I go for macragge, personally. Progressive Space Marines, aircraft, tanks, and artillery. What more could you want from a 40k army ( besides superheavies, which I have)

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

Thank you. I just deleted that portion of the thread. I submitted that portion as a reply, but the system treated it as an edit to the original post, so I had to go through the entire post and delete. Than god for the scroll wheel....

 

I also noticed your pic. Guess you like the Martians huh? I go for macragge, personally. Progressive Space Marines, aircraft, tanks, and artillery. What more could you want from a 40k army ( besides superheavies, which I have)

 

I would play as the Adeptus Mechanicus, but they don't let you play as an Explorator Fleet...

 

It's sad, but it is what it is. I play Ultramarines as well, although I dabble with Orks every now and then.