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Music Note and Fire Star are going the apartment Complex to start to live in this Big City of Manehatten. When they got there Music Note ask the Mare for the Key of there rooms. The Mare look at Music and tell here the rooms are at floor 3 Room265 and give her the keys.

 

Music look at Fire and said: Look Big Brother now we can start living in Manehatten now it well be so cool. Music send it with a big smile.

 

Fire look at her and gust sign and just walk to the elevator she press the button for the third floor. They walk out of the elevator and walk to the room when they got there she took the key and open the door. She enter fist and was happy how it looked but Fire saw the room her was not that happy at all.

 

Great a fantasy room I be living in: he said with a angry tone.

 

Music look at Fire and tell him: Well I think it is nice for me I think you need to be grateful we have a place to live.

 

Fire just roll his eyes: Fine I am grateful but I gust don't like how this room looks that all Music.

 

Music: Well I hope you like it one day we well be here for a wild Brother.

 

Fire: Maybe for now I need to take a nap were is my room I be sleep in.

 

Music: There room is next to the living room.

 

Fire nodded and went to his room he open it up his room and drop his bags and hit the bad.

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Eddie is at his house, his back hooves on the kitchen table as hes sitting on the chair reading the mail he got "festival...royal news..." he keeps throwing the unnecessary mail on the floor "...pfah! now who could possibly care if shining armor and cadence are expecting a foal? not me, they can...." Eddie found an envelope that cought his attention "them? but i payed for this month" he opened it and started reading it "well isnt this nice? nothing is better than a tax decline after your 18th birthday. i hate birthdays anway" he ripped the letter apart and threw the paper bits on the ground "how is it possible that i dont have rights to this house?!"

 

(ill continue tommarow)

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Music walk to Fire room to see if he is sleeping she saw him pass out. "He must been tired for the trip" she grab the handle of the door and closed it slowly.

 

Music walk to her room and open one of her saddle bags and grab a dress out of it " Wow I still can believe that Rarity just gave me it for free" she jump with excitement.

 

She put on the dress looks nice on her. With the sky blue mix with a white straight line through the dress. "Now I well go and see is some of this ponies in this city" she grab her bag and key. And off she outside.

 

She walk thee block down and she saw a small café she decided to go inside the café. She look around the café and saw lots of ponies in the café. She walk to the pony in front counter and she ordered " Can I have some coconut mix" the pony grab some kind of liquid and pull it in a glass.

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Eddie got up and started pacing back and forth "they're gonna evict me...heheh! why do they care if i WAS 17? they only care getting their bits. Yeah lets pretend we have a very civilized society" Eddie let out a long sigh. He walked over to the kitchen counter as he opened it "...wheres the tea?....DARN!" Eddie slammed the cabinet and went in his bedroom to get the bits and his sadlebag "everything is always not where they should be...or they simply dont exist" Eddie left his house and locked it behind him as he was making his way torwards the local store. He started talking to himself "we can both agree that we hate coffee...coffee is by far the most nastiest thing ive ever drank. Tea beats coffee any day"

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Pony behind the counter give the coconut mix to Music she thank him and walk to one of the table outside. She look around and said " This city well be the place I will make it in" she smile of the thought.

 

She finished her drink she left some bits on the table and she walk out. She start to walk to a mall " Well why not I have lots of time. I may buy something for my brother" she walk to the mall.

 

Fire wake up to fine the apartment empty he look around to fine the kitchen and make some lunch. After he make is lunch he walk to the living room and sent down on the couch. " I hope Music having fun out there."

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Eddie's convercation with him self led deeper into discussing philosophy.

As he was walking and talking torwards the store he wasnt aware of what day and what time was currently, he shook his head as he looked around "what time is it? better yet, WHAT DAY IS IT!" he looked around once more and saw a light blue pony with sunglasses and a watch on her hoof.

Eddie unfolded his wings and flew torwards her, he landed infront of her, stopping her "uuuh yeah, i didnt know how to get your attention, i need to know the time and day currently. Cuz if its sunday or saturday and the store is closed i will have to find some tea elsewhere"

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Eddie's convercation with him self led deeper into discussing philosophy.

As he was walking and talking torwards the store he wasnt aware of what day and what time was currently, he shook his head as he looked around "what time is it? better yet, WHAT DAY IS IT!" he looked around once more and saw a light blue pony with sunglasses and a watch on her hoof.

Eddie unfolded his wings and flew torwards her, he landed infront of her, stopping her "uuuh yeah, i didnt know how to get your attention, i need to know the time and day currently. Cuz if its sunday or saturday and the store is closed i will have to find some tea elsewhere"

Music was walk to the mall then studding a gray pegisai landed infront of Music " umm you know you should say ha miss or something like that you know." Music tell him with a annoyed look " I well like to give the day is but I well like to know the who the pony name is if you do not mine good sir." Music thought to herself " Is all the ponies in manehatten all like this pony gust stop in front of you."

 

Fire look out the window and thought " Well why not is Music is outside I going out to" Fire walk to is room and grab a the bag and is key and he walk outside. He decided to go to the grocery store to buy some food they can eat some dinner tonight.

 

(ooc I well post today but the rest of the week I well not post tell the weekend comes again)

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Eddie looked at her with the same cold sort of emotionless look on his face "living in solitude makes me slowly lose my ability to talk appropriatly to others. And im not very comfortable telling you my...aah whatever, its Eddie, my name...is Eddie.....SO!! can you tell me the time and date....? PLE-A-SE? no wait...are you even local? you dont seem very local, maybe you are...dont know why i have this suspicion that you arent one...." Eddie walked up close to the pony and whispered "but are you?" it wasnt known if Eddie was mentally deranged or not

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Eddie looked at her with the same cold sort of emotionless look on his face "living in solitude makes me slowly lose my ability to talk appropriatly to others. And im not very comfortable telling you my...aah whatever, its Eddie, my name...is Eddie.....SO!! can you tell me the time and date....? PLE-A-SE? no wait...are you even local? you dont seem very local, maybe you are...dont know why i have this suspicion that you arent one...." Eddie walked up close to the pony and whispered "but are you?" it wasnt known if Eddie was mentally deranged or not

 

Music noticed he not a nice pony at all and being rude kinds of proves it. Music took a deep breath " The day is Saturday and the time is 1:30pm now" said it within annoyed tone.

 

" We'll hello Eddie my name is Music Note nice to.." then Eddie ask she is local. He start to walk a little close to her he made her a little uncomfortable he got closer and whispered to her are she is local. Music walk back a little and tell him " Did you mom ever tell you never get close to a mare like that" she giving he a angry look.

 

" To answer your question No I gust move here today now stop being weird OK" Music tell Eddie hope he just acting. Then she noticed something on him he does not have a cutie mark. She wanted to ask him but how rude he was she decided not to ask him.

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"uuuh, brrraah! ....my mom was an evil mare and..." Eddie noticed her angry expression and flew back a bit "woah! no need to be angry at me for asking a simple question" Eddie started imitating a rich mare's voice and accent "ooh im gonna wear this dress and these sunglasses, oh they simply look marvelous and devine" Eddie could of never understand why he was the one to be always bullied and discriminated "oh and you're not local? well let me recommend a fine place where you will fit in immedietly, its down 2 blocks called a beauty salon...you started this-this-this....argument"

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"uuuh, brrraah! ....my mom was an evil mare and..." Eddie noticed her angry expression and flew back a bit "woah! no need to be angry at me for asking a simple question" Eddie started imitating a rich mare's voice and accent "ooh im gonna wear this dress and these sunglasses, oh they simply look marvelous and devine" Eddie could of never understand why he was the one to be always bullied and discriminated "oh and you're not local? well let me recommend a fine place where you will fit in immedietly, its down 2 blocks called a beauty salon...you started this-this-this....argument"

Music look at Eddie " Look bud I didn't started nothing you could of gust say thank and gone you marry way" she tell he moved it angry tone the more he talk the more angry she got. " And the other thing I not that tipe of pony I do not care how I look like Eddie" she was holding her self back to not hitting him.

 

Fire was walking to the grocery store he saw Music was talking a gray pegisai but something going on between them to. Fire decided to get closer and hard them arguing then Fire saw Music was holding herself back. He ran to them to make them stop arguing " HA Music how is going" hoping being nice well make them stop.

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Eddie started to get a little angry at the mare, he had difficulties with mares.

he actually hated them for a couple of reasons "yeah i kind of see that you dont care how you dress and look. Explains why you wear that ragged doormat you probably call a dress" Eddie kind of felt accomplished insulting the mare's dress.

he noticed some pony running up to them adressing the mare, Eddie thought they were boyfriend and girlfriend.

he also noticed his fox tail, from that Eddie gave a manic stare at the orange pony.

 

(this is my last post for today, going to bed, see you next time :) )

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Eddie started to get a little angry at the mare, he had difficulties with mares.

he actually hated them for a couple of reasons "yeah i kind of see that you dont care how you dress and look. Explains why you wear that ragged doormat you probably call a dress" Eddie kind of felt accomplished insulting the mare's dress.

he noticed some pony running up to them adressing the mare, Eddie thought they were boyfriend and girlfriend.

he also noticed his fox tail, from that Eddie gave a manic stare at the orange pony.

 

(this is my last post for today, going to bed, see you next time :) )

 

Music gut so angry at him " Ok bud I going to give you a hooves in your face" Music lifted her hoove at him but Fire grab her and said " Come down Music lets just talk like civilized ponies OK" He look at her.

 

Music put her hoove down and look at Fire " Ok but I think he well not listen to you he's a jerk" Music said it looking what at Eddie"

 

Fire took a deep breath and said " Ha I Fire I,m Music Big Brother lest talk what did she say to make you so angry" Fire he felt anger wat his back coming from Music.

 

(ooc ok have a good night this is my last post too)

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Eddie's tried to dodge the mare's punch as he thought she will hit him "dont think i wont hit back....and yeah lets be civilazed you ugly destructive cave-mare....hi im Eddie that lives in this city. Hmmm where to begin? i tried to ask your sister the time and day, i didnt like the way she way acting, like a stuck-up princess that thinks she deserves to be treated like one....SOO! what i do, i tell her that her dress she is wearing made her look like a walking trash bag" Eddie looked at both of them with wide eyes, as Eddie unfolded his wings and flew up on top of a light post started what seemed like a gibberish rant of a madpony (madman) "ich weiß nicht, wie die Politik auch nicht, was schien, die Hälfte Fuchs halb Bär in einem danke Werft, die nicht tun, was gesagt wurde, sich von der osmanischen geschehen war gefangen!" Eddie was slowly forgeting the german language he learned and what all the words meant, he wasnt sure he was making sence in his rant but in his mind it did "understand? VERSTEHEN??! no wait it dosent HowCouldTheyDoThatToMe?"

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Eddie's tried to dodge the mare's punch as he thought she will hit him "dont think i wont hit back....and yeah lets be civilazed you ugly destructive cave-mare....hi im Eddie that lives in this city. Hmmm where to begin? i tried to ask your sister the time and day, i didnt like the way she way acting, like a stuck-up princess that thinks she deserves to be treated like one....SOO! what i do, i tell her that her dress she is wearing made her look like a walking trash bag" Eddie looked at both of them with wide eyes, as Eddie unfolded his wings and flew up on top of a light post started what seemed like a gibberish rant of a madpony (madman) "ich weiß nicht, wie die Politik auch nicht, was schien, die Hälfte Fuchs halb Bär in einem danke Werft, die nicht tun, was gesagt wurde, sich von der osmanischen geschehen war gefangen!" Eddie was slowly forgeting the german language he learned and what all the words meant, he wasnt sure he was making sence in his rant but in his mind it did "understand? VERSTEHEN??! no wait it dosent HowCouldTheyDoThatToMe?"

Fire look at Eddie in confusion he look at Music and ask her " umm... I think you made him go crazy he saying nonsense" her tell Music.

 

She look at this crazy pony who start the fight " Umm.... You think I broke him" she said it concern tone. Fire tell Music " I think you should sorry to him be fore he come down here I start to hurt us and other ponies" He send being concern Eddie well do something he well regret.

 

Music hate to say sorry to the made pony but to stop Eddie going completely crazy she took a deep breath " EDDIE I AM SO SORRY I DID MAED TO BE SO RUBE TO YOU" yelled top of her lungs. Fire smile at his sister and hope he heard her.

 

 

(ooc sorry for the late post but this post is for well people like me who work late and can only post on Saturdays and Sundays only in the real wolrd. If you still well like to post here just let me know.)

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Fire look at Eddie in confusion he look at Music and ask her " umm... I think you made him go crazy he saying nonsense" her tell Music.

 

She look at this crazy pony who start the fight " Umm.... You think I broke him" she said it concern tone. Fire tell Music " I think you should sorry to him be fore he come down here I start to hurt us and other ponies" He send being concern Eddie well do something he well regret.

 

Music hate to say sorry to the made pony but to stop Eddie going completely crazy she took a deep breath " EDDIE I AM SO SORRY I DID MAED TO BE SO RUBE TO YOU" yelled top of her lungs. Fire smile at his sister and hope he heard her.

 

 

(ooc sorry for the late post but this post is for well people like me who work late and can only post on Saturdays and Sundays only in the real wolrd. If you still well like to post here just let me know.)

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while the two siblings were talking to each other, Eddie slided down the light post imagining he was a fireman that kept setting things on fire "theres a fire going on, and it also turns out that Celestia is really a male in elephant's skin...weeee!!" he landed on the ground as the mare screamed her apology, Eddie looked at her "...hah...im gonna accept your apology for now. so now we kiss right? to be honest i wouldnt kiss any mare even if her lips were made from candy" he looked at Fire and said in an english accent "oi you are the peacemaker aint ya lad?" Eddie knew how to fake a few accents from the world

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while the two siblings were talking to each other, Eddie slided down the light post imagining he was a fireman that kept setting things on fire "theres a fire going on, and it also turns out that Celestia is really a male in elephant's skin...weeee!!" he landed on the ground as the mare screamed her apology, Eddie looked at her "...hah...im gonna accept your apology for now. so now we kiss right? to be honest i wouldnt kiss any mare even if her lips were made from candy" he looked at Fire and said in an english accent "oi you are the peacemaker aint ya lad?" Eddie knew how to fake a few accents from the world

Music look at him and look at Fire back to Eddie " First of all I kind of happy you accept my apology and the next thing NO WHY I GOING TO KISS YOU AT ALL THE ONE WHO START IT ALL FIRST PLACE' She tell him with annoyed and sick look on her face.

 

Fire look at Eddie and thought to himself " Did he just hitting on my sister" just then it hit him.

" He is hitting on my sister" Fire walk to Eddie tell Fire he was the peacemaker. Fire look at Eddie and said " Yes I was hopping you can be friends in this big city we living in" then Fire then walk closer to Eddie ear and tell him with a whisper " If I see you going near my sister again oh help me Celestia you well never see a day of flying again" Fire give him a angry smile.

 

Fire tell Music there done here. Fire and Music walk away from Eddie Music ask Fire " What you tell him" he look at is sister and just said " I tell him have a good day sir" and give her a smile. And kept on walking to the mall.

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Music looked at him and looked at Fire back to Eddie " First of all im kind of happy you accepted my apology and the next thing NO WHY SHOULD I KISS YOU AT ALL THE ONE WHO START IT ALL IN THE FIRST PLACE' She told him with annoyed and sick look on her face.

 

Fire look at Eddie and thought to himself " Did he just hit on my sister" just then it hit him.

" He is hitting on my sister" Fire walked up to Eddie tell Fire he was the peacemaker. Fire looked at Eddie and said " Yes I was hopping you can be a friend in this big city we living in" then Fire walked closer to Eddie's ear and told him with a whisper " If I see you going near my sister again oh help me Celestia you well never see a day of flying again" Fire give him an angry smile.

 

Fire told Music they're done here. Fire and Music walked away from Eddie, Music asked Fire " What did you tell him" he looked at his sister and just said " I told him, have a good day sir" and gave her a smile. And kept on walking to the mall.

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Eddie saw then turning back and walking, it kind of made him feel conffused, without any second thought Eddie ran up to Fire and did the same as he did with his sister, he stopped infront of them stopping fire also "hold oooon now" he ran up close to Fire and said kind of loudly "you EVAH!! come close to like that ever again!!...you will not recieve any cheese. HO!!!" Eddie jumped back, crossed his eyes and stuck his tongue out at them and said "NOW HOOOO! we can part...fwiend!"

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Eddie saw then turning back and walking, it kind of made him feel conffused, without any second thought Eddie ran up to Fire and did the same as he did with his sister, he stopped infront of them stopping fire also "hold oooon now" he ran up close to Fire and said kind of loudly "you EVAH!! come close to like that ever again!!...you will not recieve any cheese. HO!!!" Eddie jumped back, crossed his eyes and stuck his tongue out at them and said "NOW HOOOO! we can part...fwiend!"

 

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Fire look at this pony who is so crazy he make no sense at all. Music start to got a little scared of Eddie and tell Fire " I think is a lunatic brother" she said in a scared tone.

 

Fire look at his sister and turn back at Eddie " Look Eddie we well like you to stop acting like a lunatic you are scaring all the kid around us" Fire tell Eddie hopping he stop what he doing or snap him out of it. 

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Fire looked at this pony who is so crazy he made no sense at all. Music started to get a little scared of Eddie and told Fire " I think hes a lunatic brother" she said in a scared tone.

 

Fire look at his sister and turned back at Eddie " Look Eddie we will like you to stop acting like a lunatic you are scaring all the kids around us" Fire told Eddie hopping he would stop what hes doing or snap him out of it. 

 

"THIS IS MY NORMAL VOICE!" Eddie started to make fun of the mares scarred condition, he fell to the ground right next to Fire's front hooves "brother save me ah-ah-AAAH! hes chasing me hes going to kill me, hes crazy! ooooOOOH" Eddie got flew up to get off the ground and on his hooves. Eddie turned to Fire "scaring the kids? how charming, i have to stop being ME just because of some foals....MARVELOUS!! SIMPLY MARVELOUS!! like a romantic drama play at the theatre...but ya know, till we meet again ya two!" Eddie turned his head left and right, he then unfolded his wings and hovered above ground and flew torwards the local store

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"THIS IS MY NORMAL VOICE!" Eddie started to make fun of the mares scarred condition, he fell to the ground right next to Fire's front hooves "brother save me ah-ah-AAAH! hes chasing me hes going to kill me, hes crazy! ooooOOOH" Eddie got flew up to get off the ground and on his hooves. Eddie turned to Fire "scaring the kids? how charming, i have to stop being ME just because of some foals....MARVELOUS!! SIMPLY MARVELOUS!! like a romantic drama play at the theatre...but ya know, till we meet again ya two!" Eddie turned his head left and right, he then unfolded his wings and hovered above ground and flew torwards the local store

Fire and Music look at each other and said " We make sure we well not see him again."

 

Fire tell Music " OK that is over now let's continue on our" then he stop and look at Music. "What were we doing be for Eddie" he ask Music. She tell him " I was going to the mall and think you were going to the supermarket."

 

"Oh yeah I was going to the supermarket" look dumb founded. "List go together to the mall and Supermarket Fire" Music tell him. " OK why not" he said, they start to walk to the mall.

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Fire and Music looked at each other and said " We'll make sure we will not see him again."

 

Fire told Music " OK that is over now let's continue on our" then he stop and look at Music. "What were we doing before Eddie" he ask Music. She tell him " I was going to the mall and thought you were going to the supermarket."

 

"Oh yeah I was going to the supermarket" look dumb founded. "Lets go together to the mall and Supermarket, Fire" Music told him. " OK why not" he said, they started to walk to the mall.

 

Eddie was flying with normal pace torwards the store, he flew over the local market.

he saw ponies exchanging goods, mares buying vegetable and old mares loudly negotiating over the current high prices for meat.

Eddie decided it was best to buy what he wanted there. He landed on the ground and started going through crowds of ponies, trying to reach the stand where he usually buys most of his goods from, he mumbled to himself 'too many ponies...too many!...' eventually he got to the stand and his acquaintance was behind it as he greeted him "whats up Ed, trying to steal something from here? i hope not" Eddie looked around the stand and replied without looking at him "at ease, im just need to buy some tea! you got any green tea?" the merchant replied "nu-uh, i got black tea the one you always buy" Eddie didnt pay any attentiont to him as he was looking at the strange jar, he picked it up to get a closer look "the hell is this?" the merchant replied "this is the finest alchemy potion, its said that it cures broken bones and what-not" Eddie replied "mm-hmm, really important these days that never made any sence aye? as soon as these ponies will experience true pain and suffering, they will forget they had back pains or broken bones... but really there never was any sence, we are born insane and grow sanity over time....THAT, is really bad.....anyway give me the black tea,as always in the small bag"

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After a hour Fire and Music get to the mall. Fire look at his sister ask Her" This is the mall right" Music look at him " Yes Fire it is the mall " she give hie a little annoying look.

 

Fire gave her a sheepish smile. And they enter the mall. They walk for a 30 minutes on tell Music found a close store. " Fire look it has the latest fashion I going to buy some new clothes come in brother I buy new clothes too" she tell him. Fire look at her " Maybe next time Music I think I have enough clothes to wear" he look at her, she was a little disappointed.

 

" Ok then please wait here for me" she ask him. Fire smiled at her and node it Music smiled back and enter the store.

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Fire was waiting fore Music to come out of the clothes store he was looking around the mall. " I say this mall is to big for me I think I prefer ponyville market place" he said to himself.

 

Music is looking around the store, on tell a worker pony come up to her. "Miss do you need some help" the worker pony ask Music " Not right now" the worker node and walk off. " What to buy" she said.

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