Vorax 43 January 31, 2014 Share January 31, 2014 My story that I've got reeling in my mind centers around an OC of mine named Varus. Varus is the child of Spike and Rarity. Varus was separated from his parents when he was a baby by Lucifer. Lucifer killed Rarity and took Varus as his own (Spike is on royal business at the time of the attack). A few years later, Varus is back in Ponyville on a mission to kill the Mane Six. The question is, can he? I just posted my idea here to see what everypony thinks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy-Rex 54 January 31, 2014 Share January 31, 2014 1.: You probably mean Mane 5, since Rarity is already dead 2.: The question is: Why? I want to be true to you: Reading this idea gives me the following thoughts: Okay. To get the reader's attention you must confront them! Throw all you got against them, give them what you want and soon they will be eating sugar out of your hands! It's not interesting if he can do it, the interesting fact is what drives him to do that? And why has he been kidnapped in the first place? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Join the herd!Sign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now