SnipSnap 432 February 28, 2014 Share February 28, 2014 (edited) This is WIP, so this may not look appealing in your sight. UPDATE: I made the OC's info! Read my latest post!.. Hello guys! I have made a Pony OC which represents myself, so here it is Here it is. Created with Pony OC Creator V3. http://generalzoi.deviantart.com/art/Pony-Creator-v3-397808116 Edited March 5, 2014 by SnipSnap 1 All credit goes to Kyoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825 February 28, 2014 Share February 28, 2014 Nice looking OC you got there! 1 Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCeWg-TtBRMfqketa1ELyKGg Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/menelik-david-kenneth-cannady 2nd SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/thunder-dash-alternative/tracks Pony.fm: https://pony.fm/thunder-dash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnipSnap 432 March 4, 2014 Author Share March 4, 2014 (edited) Okay, I have made this. Clearly not the best OC... suggestions welcome... aw, here it goes : NOTE: This is a WIP Pony OC. I'm still working on it right now. Gender: Male Species: Earth Pony Personality: Socially active, kind, generous, forgiving, and happy. He likes hanging out with his friends and family a lot. Willing to do anything for anyone. He knows karate. He likes visiting his grandparents. He likes his society. He likes music. Backstory: When he was born, he was the happiest pony you would never have compared to, because he had a twin brother South Tempest. They were best friends, and always had a good time together. They'd play together, go to school together, help each other, just basically do everything with each other. But South died of cancer when both were still very, very young. Him passing away has affected North the most, and was sad every day of every week. Then one day, when he drooped on the side of his bed, his mother East Tempest came, and tried everything to make him cheer up, but failed. Then she said to North that he should make friends at school. This was hard, since he was socially awkward around other people, but nonetheless, he found new friends, and North slowly became happy again over the months, recovering. And soon, he became himself again. Give me your best shot! Hit me with those criticisms! Edited March 5, 2014 by SnipSnap 1 All credit goes to Kyoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Magician 494 March 5, 2014 Share March 5, 2014 Okay, I have made this. Clearly not the best OC... suggestions welcome... aw, here it goes : Gender: Male Species: Earth Pony Personality: Socially active, kind, generous, forgiving, and happy. He likes hanging out with his friends and family a lot. Willing to do anything for anyone. He knows karate. He likes going on the internet. He likes visiting his grandparents. He likes his society and the modern times. He likes music. He likes films. Backstory: When he was born, he was the happiest pony you would never have compared to, because he had a twin brother South Tempest. They were best friends, and always had a good time together. They'd play together, watch TV and movies together, and go to school together. But South died of cancer when both were still very, very young. Him passing away has affected North the most, and was sad every day of every week. Then one day, when he drooped on the side of his bed, his mother East Tempest came, and tried everything to make him cheer up, but failed. Then she said to North that he should make friends at school. This was hard, since he was socially awkward around other people, but nonetheless, he found new friends, and North quickly became happy again. Give me your best shot! Hit me with those criticisms! Nice OC! My only criticism is with how North "suddenly became happy". Does he just forget his brother's death or does he slowly become more happy now that he has new friends? It doesn't seem clear to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnipSnap 432 March 5, 2014 Author Share March 5, 2014 Nice OC! My only criticism is with how North "suddenly became happy". Does he just forget his brother's death or does he slowly become more happy now that he has new friends? It doesn't seem clear to me. I have fixed it. Hopefully that will satisfy your needs. 1 All credit goes to Kyoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Magician 494 March 5, 2014 Share March 5, 2014 I have fixed it. Hopefully that will satisfy your needs. Wonderful! I'm sure this will be a great OC! Does he have any flaws other than losing his brother? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnipSnap 432 March 5, 2014 Author Share March 5, 2014 Wonderful! I'm sure this will be a great OC! Does he have any flaws other than losing his brother? You know what? I think I have to make this a WIP thread... I think the OC needs lots of work. Yea, I will work on the flaws. All credit goes to Kyoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Magician 494 March 5, 2014 Share March 5, 2014 You know what? I think I have to make this a WIP thread... I think the OC needs lots of work. Yea, I will work on the flaws. Great! It's nice to have flaws to prevent them from becoming a boring mary sue type of character. I hope to see great progression in your OC! Keep up the great work! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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