Mrs. Salvation

[Calssius VI SilverB 17]

Everypony? May I introduce you ponies my OC, Mrs. Salvation.

 

[dedacct6 2,591]

You have some pretty good linework.

Just there are some proportional problems.

-the wing is too low, and its also very small

-the eyes are also too small

-the front right hoof is all curvy, ponies don't have noodle legs, you need to know where the joints are so the leg looks like is bending.

-lastly, the horn is just slightly too high.

 

So work on the proportions because your linework is already really good, and keep on practicing

Edited March 16, 2014 by Pelate

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

That's a really awesome OC. I have to agree with Pelate on those proportions though. 

[Calssius VI SilverB 17]

Maybe I have went overboard on the artwork... thank you for pointing it out.