Pony Maker OC opinions?

[IyoGata 1]

Sinner Spark, Clay Faith, and Star Haze respectively.

These ocs are a part of an animated spinoff in progress called Hey, Little Pony! Absolute Emotion

 

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/315/2/4/sinner_spark_concept_by_iyogata-d6tyiil.png

http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2014/057/3/d/clay_faith_concept_by_iyogata-d7823wv.png

http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2014/060/5/f/star_haze_concept_by_iyogata-d785bhg.png

 

I want clay faith and sinner spark's hair to be different but i'm not sure which direction to go in.

 

Sinner Spark is a clumsy mischievous pony that seems to do everything right in the wrong way, Clay Faith is a strong, kind and lighthearted pony that settles fights, and Star Haze, besides her fear of being alone is fearless and sensitive. She'll remember anything you say to her.

 

I need backstory for clay faith and star haze though

Edited March 25, 2014 by IyoGata

[Teller 360]

They have a decent design and the colors don't make my eyes bleed. At a second glance, the two-tone contrast going on in Star Haze's hair is a bit distracting.

 

Though I can imagine drawing Star Haze's hair from different angles would be a chore and a half.

Edited March 25, 2014 by Teller

[Venomous 18,862]

I like them ^^

 

If you ever need a character drawn, just ask me

[Bird Mom 900]

Nice work, I can actually tell you have thought these characters out. Unlike others who randomly click for their OC creation, I can tell you put a great deal of thought into it. Overall opinion of mine is that it's great, and keep up with the thought and imagination.