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A Day Distraction - OC Villian for Lightning Bliss?


Lightning Bliss

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Why I am distracting myself:

 

So when me and my family rented this house from our landlord, there was no warning in our lease plan about having caged animals for pets. The landlord lady, did have minor issues with large dogs and cats being in the house. But she was fine when we explained our animals and cats.

 

Our lease stated that 5 people including myself were living in the house along with 2 dogs and 2 cats. Well two people had moved out, my husband moved in, then my nana moved in cause she has alzheimers, and like we can predict when one of us gets pregnant? Ya my sister gave birth to my nephew. So now in total there are 7 of us currently living in the house.

 

Our landlord had her agent inspect the property and how we've mantained the house and had no complaints. However the landlord owner wanted her own personal inspection cause she was trying to make my step father increase our rental payment on our 2yr lease. So she came to our house...bringing in two clients along with her...basically showing the house while we were still there!!! RUDE MUCH???

 

She came up to mine and my husband's room and saw our 6 pet rats. She clearly stated "Aww they are so cute! you must be proud." To which I said yes I was.

 

She and my stepdad negotiated on the lease agreement and she told him that she would think about it. Well two weeks after the fact...we get an email last night... Not only is she 'demanding' that our rental fee goes up to 1500$ (thats a $100 increase for us), but she also is charging lease breaking fees on the two extra people being my "nephew" and my "nana".

 

Here's the kicker though everyone... She's ordering me to get rid of my rats... and is charging us with a $500 fee for having them here. Again the lease does not state anything against caged animals...and she even said they were cute... Now she's telling me I have to get rid of them and is charging my parents an accusation fee???!!!!!

 

I reallly don't know what to say...One thing is for sure I'm not giving up my rats...she can go *$^* herself. I don't know about the fee though... I'll have to pay for it but that doesn't change the fact she wants me to get rid of them. And what she's asking for in the extra charges on my family and plus increasing the leasing fee...? I think we'll be moving soon...and we've only been here for 3yrs...

 

Me, my husband, my family and defiently my rats...are asking for prayers in this time of uncertainty and fear....Thank you everyone.

 

 

So after a horrible night, waking up to the fact it's the day of my Birthday Party...it's not looking good due to the following statement in the spoiler. So to distract myself without gorging on delcious rainbow cupcakes my mother made for me. I thought about this spontanious idea.

 

What if Lightning Bliss had an arch enemy?

 

You know?

 

Like Twilight to Trixie sort.

 

Her arch nemesis, the opposite of her personality...the sting to the bee etc. Thing is I'm not sure what to create for a villian for her specifically. I don't want it to be another alicorn because alicorns are getting bad ratings lately...even mine isn't safe from judgement (to which I respect, everypony has an opinion), so what would her arch villian be?

 

The best villian insperation I can think of is an ex-boyfriend with the combonation of a bully from her childhood all mixed into one single villian. A villian that constantly shows her up to make her feel worthless and unloved. LB (Lightning Bliss) is my ponysona, she is my feminine/shy/unconfident/couragous side of my personality who can have low self esteem as it is. What if her arch nemesis were to feed off her flaws...in some way.

 

Any ideas folks?

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Oh my God, I'm so sorry to hear about what you're going through with that @$$hole landlord of yours. I hope everything turns out well for you, your family and your pets eventually *hugs tightly*

 

Anywho, onto the subject of an arch-nemesis for your OC. You don't want it to be an Alicorn so let's make him a Unicorn, because all villains have to be powerful. You say that your OC is below par when it comes to magic, well let's make him very good at magic. Give him a filthy mouth (always spouting foul language) and most importantly, give him the worst attitude ever (kinda like Trixie's attitude in "Magic Duel". Give him feelings and personalities that are the exact opposite of your OC.

 

These ideas any good? :)

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@@MidnightMoon,

 

You go to your status that manages blogs... btw thanks for making a legitatmate post to my blog that was so helpful...

 

@@GrauWitz,

 

These are great ideas, ooh a unicorn villian? Hmm defiently was thinking too much outside the box. I guess i was thinking more pegasus or outside the pony species like dimaond dog or gryphon. But a pony nemesis that's a unicorn is a defient good start.

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Okay, I some more ideas for a villain for your OC (Let's brainstorm)

 

My first idea is that he could be one of those villains who are really unassuming and fit into society very well. In fact, all other ponies think he's a nice guy when only you and your friends know him for what he really is. I got the idea from the T-1000 from Terminator 2. In fact, you could make him a Royal Guard so he could pretty much be a ponified T-1000 (except the villain we're planning isn't a Terminator)

 

My next idea is that he could a really intelligent, brains-over-brawn villain. I got the idea from the following villains;

 

Hannibal Lector (Silence of the Lambs)

H.A.L. 9000 (2001: A Space Odyssey)

Alex DeLarge (A Clockwork Orange)

Khan Noonien Singh (Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan)

 

The species of the villain is entirely up to you. These ideas any good? :)

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All very good ideas dude but i've established her villian already, he's in my signature, I call him Chase Razor, he's actually a character based off two real people I know from my younger life, my ex and my utlimate bully from middle school.

 

This antagonist is the exact opposite of Bliss. Where as she wants to get along with others and bring about peace, has a blissful personality despite her tragidies...her villian thrives on bringing harm to others, taunting and harassing others that he would deem 'unworthy'. They've both had tragic pasts.

 

Where as Bliss lost her father from a heart attack, Chase lost his mother, not by death but divorce by humilitation from his father (details in his OC thread). He also was a high class magic user in his class back in Canterlot before he was forced to move to Appleloosa where Bliss would later move to. Bliss barely knows the basic of magic and has no real target talent to it unlike he does.

 

Their rivalry, well i wouldn't call it a rivalry, Chase just flat out wants to seek revenge because she refused to take interest in him (he had a crush on her and tried to show off in front of her by bullying another class mate), and she stood up to him back when they were foals at school. She made him look foolish and not as scary to their peers...which is what he thrived on, his pride, his pleasure, she basically took that away form him. So he picked on her their entire school years till they graduated and went their seperate ways. However he never forgot...

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Pretty good! Oh and sorry for not seeing your signature with the villain, no one's signatures appear for me for some reason :/

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