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Update #2


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Its been a while since my first update sadly but I'm not going to let people think Chaos in Me is a lost cause of mlp fanfiction, it is still in the works but I am having some story and character development problems, Instead of writing the story at the moment I have been reading and watching countless stories and shows, both good and bad to see what they have done right and what is done wrong, watching critic reviews are especially handy for this purpose.

 

As I want this to be it's own story with it's own characters, I want this to be rather unique; however I know that I also must be faithful to my source material, which is mlp:fim lore, being Discords original take over of Equestria, and later getting turned to stone, I want to give my characters a purpose within this lore, without forcing a modification in the cannon lore that is given which means I must compromise.

 

Giving the cannon characters in the story faithful as well is sometimes a little issue, making the Discord moments in my view of good is very, very hard to do; my writing is not normally based around comedic efforts, I do not normally try to make a story funny, I enjoy moderately dark, intense stories, which is one of the main reasons the story is in it's time, Equestria in Chaos allows a lot of story telling in individual characters as well as groups, getting the sadness, desperation and confusion that would have come along in these times, and this allows for some fun combat moments as well, considering Hyper is a samurai pyromancer, I would like to use his abilities to the full advantage but not make him in any sense overpowered, I won't give out spoilers but there are special details in this story about Hyper that you will not find anywhere in his character log, and I sure as heck won't tell you.

 

So in a sense,

Writing the final version of Chaos in Me (CIM)

Is at a depressing 2% done

And that is only research and working with ideas to see what works. hardly a thing is written on paper :I

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