Hello everyone it's me again, doing my first comedy review. This story is by a person Dontwannaknow it's called Scootaloo is slightly flame retardant it's a story on how Scootaloo got a cutie mark however it's not what she expected. How it started off was odd Rarity most likely pacing around a waiting room. So the story get's an A- for it's creativity it wasn't perfect but it's a start. The speech/description was awesome that deserves an C- the fact you decided to put in real words was okay but not as appealing. Over all this story gets an A because of it's creativity is that is fair. I know other bronies like other types of fanfics and I respect that, but I just won't read anything that is romance, so no romances please I will not tolerate that.