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Review-My little Staring contest Alicorns can stare for a long time


Moniker

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I looked at a story called "my little staring contest, Alicorns can stare for a very long time" it was nothing like the others it was creative. The story is about the princesses of day and night having a staring contest for a muffin. Quite strange the dialogue was a little funny at times I do have to bring up. It is made by CosmicAfro that was my first story I read from him and I liked it. The dialogue I give it an C- because of the attude of the story it felt very off on Celesta's side Luna's was almost perfect. The idea I'll give a B+ only because it's his own idea not some other person's idea. Lastly the story I give a C- it felt odd never hooked you in fact the chapters were a little very little bit thought of CosmicAfro had an author's note saying he didn't fully make it some of his friends helped. I'm not saying it's a bad story but it certainly isn't my first choice, but many people have different thoughts on favorite stories so comment send me a message about what fan fiction to read as long as it's not a romance, they can't be ether of those two so Cupcakes out of the picture big time but others are just fine so like human, or adventure are okay with me.

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