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Dear Luna


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Just a little random babbling, i guess you can call this a poem if you think it's that good :P

 

Dear Luna thank you for the night

When all is gone of morning light

Out comes the night and it's full on might

The stars glow and shimmer on bright

They watch me when i'm sad and gone and give me flight

bursting through the sky like a sign from above in bright lights

The moon arrives as the stars align

and in the end they shine on bright dancing the dance of celestial's

and as i close my eyes for the night, the stars and moon watch from above shining there light on me

as the morning comes they slowly vanish until the next night

Dear Luna thank you for the night

 

Feel free to tell me what you think i honestly came up with this from the top of my head xD

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Tell me one word about you not being smart and I'll slap you in the face...

You know you've achieved your goal with it when you have me imagine it as I'm reading, which did happen in this case.

If you really want me to nitpick, I'd say give the last few lines more rhymes :P

You have amazing ideas, just don't give up before polishing a diamond *hugs*

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