(I suck at writing so please tell me everything that is wrong with it)

(The 7 ponies)

It was a normal day in Ponyville ponies were out talking with each other and working today. Today Twilight is heading to a grassy field with her friends Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and their new friend Sunset Shimmer, oh and Spike. They all were having a picnic in the field talking with each other till Twilight mentioned something about a spell she has been working on. “What kind of spell is it Twilight” Spike asked curious since Twilight didn’t tell him about the spell. “Its a spell that can let us traverse the different plain of existence so we will be able to to see what can’t be seen in our plain of existence” Twilight explained, when she finished Sunset Shimmer decided to say something about the spell. “Isn’t that a bad idea though what if something happens” Sunset Shimmer asked as she looked at Twilight. “Well lets see what would happen then besides I have been working on the spell for a while now” Twilight said as she started to do the spell. “Are you sure you want to do this darling Sunset is right it could be dangerous” Rarity said as she looked at Twilight. “It’ll be fine Rarity” Twilight exclaimed as she casted the spell but nothing happened. “Um Twilight...nothing happened” Rainbow Dash said looking around to see if the spell worked. “I don’t get it, it should have worked why didn’t it work, I trained to use this spell and it doesn’t even work” Twilight said disappointed that her spell worked. “Um Twilight what is that falling from the sky” Fluttershy said in a quite voice and the ponies looked up and saw some fall then hit the ground. “We should go check it out” Pinkie Pie said as she went towards where whatever fell from the sky crashed. “Pinkie wait” Twilight yelled as Pinkie was already off heading to the area. “I’ll go with her I want to see what fell also” Sunset Shimmer said as she went after Pinkie Pie as the others stayed.