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Trixie is a Genius (My Review)


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Wrote by: Akumokagetsu

Description: Trixie Lulamoon outwits her own socks to prove that she is indeed Great and Powerful. It is a very difficult Process.

Chapters: 1

Words: 1,510

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/164061/trixie-is-a-genius/

 

 

Hey Guys i have a Fic I have read today the Information for it is above this the story itself was defiantly funny it follows the story of Trixie trying to pass Twilight's IQ Test to try and get placed in a Job but Twilight decides to trick her after getting to the end of her wits

 

My Thoughts

I thought that this was a great story but they were some flaws such as Twilight drinking coffee but i easily excused it by the comedic appeal and it captures the type of anger that Trixie would have quite nicely

 

So I have to say that:

  • The Idea was Great
  • The Plot was Great
  • The Execution It was Alright

My Rating? Could be Longer and some Things could be Improved but still a great story

Check it out? Definitely! If you have the time to of course.

Sequel Worthy? No it would be to hard to make a sequel after this but that's just my Opinion

 

What do you guys think about this Story i'd love to know so leave your thoughts below

If you want you can suggest a Fan Fic for me to review next

 

But anyway this has gone on for long enough so until next Entry

Stay Derpy!

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