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TheLuigiLightning

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  1. I personally think it is way too early for Twilight to be an alicorn, because she still has a lot of learning to do.  I mean, the other princesses have their own issues, but they know how to handle them fairly well.  Twilight get's mad easily, and doesn't seem to care when it happens.

  2. I have absolutely no idea what I would wish for.  There are so many different possibilities, and if I choose an unwise wish, I would regret not wishing for something else for the rest of my life, plus I hate making choices, so this would probably drive me insane.  So I would personally turn down all 3 wishes.

  3. I like girls themselves!  I think they're beautiful, I think they're awesome, I think that I'm going to burn up inside whenever I hug one, I feel like I'm going to explode when I see one, I have infatuation attacks with them, I-

    *Every girl in the world looks at Adamant*

    Umm... I said... I've got an appointment I need to attend, gotta go!

  4. i actually allready read this one :P

    it's very good in my honest opinion! you shouldn't look down on yourself like that, writing seems to be going quite well for you.

    as stated in the comments on fimfiction, maybe you should get a proofreader. but that's all i got on this story.

    its original, and that's rare for a fanfic. :)

    Oh, thank you!  I really appreciate your honest positive feedback.  I guess you really do need other people in order to make a fair rating about your work.

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  5. Yeah, I made a fan fiction.  It's called Fluttershy's Bad day.  It's a slice of life story where Fluttershy goes through a really tough day.  That's all I'm going to say, because I don't want to spoil it.  I think it's completely overrated, because everyone on FIMFiction seems to like it for some reason.  I think it's terrible, but I can't speak for you guys.  Let's here your opinions.  Enjoy (I hope).

    http://www.fimfiction.net/story/108470/fluttershys-bad-day

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  6. I read it and I must admit, I almost cried... ALMOST. liarjackplz.png

     

    I actually did get a bit teary eyed, but I've read even sadder fanfics (in my opinion) that had me crying even more. Some of my favourites involve Derpy and/or her daughter.

     

    Don't worry, you're not alone.  I almost cried too XD.

    Don't worry, you're not alone.  I almost cried too XD.

    Can you link me to some of these fanfics?  (By the way I am the same person who made the man post about MLD.  I just changed my name and avatar).

  7. Hey, welcome to the herd, young mare!  That's really cool that you want to wear that Halloween costume!  I hope you scare lots of people!  This is a very friendly sight, so if you need help, talk to anyone without hesitation.  Have a great time!  Hope you make lots of friends!

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  8. Hey!  Welcome to the herd, young mare!  This is an amazing sight, and you're smart to want to stay a long time.  Everyone here is so friendly, and you can make friends within the flap of a wing.  If you need to talk to someone for any reason, no need to hesitate!  PM me anytime!

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  9. I'd give 6, much better than anything I could ever do, but I don't get what the "noise" in the background is supposed to be. There's way too much stuff going on. The NES song has a very short percussion track + 1 bass + 2 melodies which is only one melody track sometimes as they both play the same thing to get an echo effect. Get yourself a NSF player, and a NSF rip of the soundtrack so you can listen to all tracks isolated. That should help a little ;)

    Actually, all the noise in the background are the other parts in the song, however, the real song had a much better audio balance.  Thanks for the criticism!

    Oh, something I should point out, this is actually the second time through the song when they added in all of the other parts to the song, so that's why there's an extra part XD.

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