Synthis

I somewhat agree with you. I agree a lot of people will focus on what the actual content of the song is, rather than the quality of the song. People do this with all music, really. They enjoy songs about partying or whatever and aren't worried about the actual quality of the music. Now obviously its a bit different with fandom based music as it's more of an emotional connection, but that's what a lot of people are listening to the music for. They wanna hear songs about ponies. I do understand there being a problem with giving people criticism, not to mention them listening. My approach is usually to give as much helpful advice for changing things while complimenting things they've done well rather than just tell them things are bad or even tell them a specific thing is bad. I like to tell people how they can change it. They seem much more inclined to take up your advice when you're being helpful rather than just critical. This all might be obvious, but it's just my two cents I guess. Also, don't ask how I ended up finding this (you did use my name after all, heh).

Would you like me to render out an instrumental version?

I could probably get something going for you. I archive about 90% or more of my work. I'm extremely picky about what I decide to use, but I'd be fine with passing it along to someone else that can make use of it.

Good stuff. Really enjoy some of the sounds you're using. Very nice contrast in the tones and decent mixing. One thing you should work on is the drums. Gotta get those to pop out a bit more. Really like what I'm hearing though, keep it up.