...now i feel that meson bolt's done two in a row. XD gimme a moment, ill knock one out momentarily
okay, I've put together a list of people on the, well, waiting list.
Blue Moon
Stormlight
Fullmoon
Kronos
Night Tracer
Damian da prince
Comet Streak
Carnelian Clout
Stardust
Wilhelm
Renee
Dynamo
Copper
Foray
Crystal
Crystal star
Kyubi
Rebus
and Will. XD i've got some work to do.
starting with blue moon. making a post shortly.
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Everything. Wrong. With.
Blue Moon.
(Using comic sans for this one, because why not...)
Age: Adult.
Not sure why, but I typically feel like specifying what 'catagory' of age someone is in, isn't their age. You don't answer 'how old are you' with 'I'm an adult.'
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Appearance: See above.
Pretty good design, won't lie. If only I couldn't see the Ponycreator bleeding from it--granted, everyone uses that, even me--but you had that art made. You could've had the design change--but then again, since the design is good regardless, I'll give this one a half-sin.
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Cutie Mark: Blue Moon has a blue crescent moon as a cutie mark. It signifies his desire to become an astronomer. He earned it when he took a trip to the local Air and Space Museum where his classmates and he were given telescopes for kids. That night, he used his telescope and got so excited learning about all the constellations and planets, and recording them in a notebook. That burst of excitement caused his cutie mark to appear.
Now, you can't have Celestia giving him a cutie mark for being the alicorn of--oh? Well, this is a new one. If anything, the only problems I see with this passage is the most half-assed name ever for the museum (I mean, c'mon, 'air'?), and some grammer. Nicely done, and if there hadn't been those few errors, I would've retracted a sin for this.
Personality: Blue Moon loves to read and learn about astronomy and the night sky.
Loves to read and learn about subjects relating to cutie mark--Applejack likes to buck apples, Twilight likes to practice spells, Fluttershy likes to--yeah, you get what I mean. First sentence is irrelevant.
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Also, 'about astronomy and the night sky'--they're one and the same. It's like saying someone was learning how to prepare food and cook food.
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This was his main activity he did during his childhood, and as such; he didn't put too much time in learning advanced magic. Nonetheless, he still learned the basic spells most unicorns learned such as telekinesis. He has an extended knowledge of astronomy and related, and is quite smart in general on most subjects.
Semicolon doesn't belong. Also, read: previous sins. And I'm not sure if every Unicorn that's not completely engulfed in their cutie mark's talent actually indulges in advanced spells--save for the ones that're like, spell-learning exclusive (I'm looking at you, Moondancer). Who are all in Celestia's School of Best Pony Race. Learned basic spells, like nearly every unicorn in existence, and has extended knowledge over the subject that'll be his destiny, and quite smart in general on most subjects.
So he's a NERRRRRRRRRRRD! And generic, truthfully--give him some hobbies. The way he is now, he's pretty much a forgettable guy you meet when you visit the museum.
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While he is smart, he can be very stubborn when someone tries to prove him wrong and may argue that he is correct depending on the subject. But most of the time, he is probably one of the nicest ponies you'll meet and is extremely polite.
'Is nice until you're an asshole to him; slap a stubborn flaw on him to be on the safe side', now, I wonder where else I've seen those traits...
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When he was a child, he accidentally did something incorrectly in school which caused his schoolmates to laugh at him. From that point, he decided to keep to himself and because of that; he never had much social interaction. Because of this, he became very shy and quiet (this, fortunately, lessened as he aged, but he does act shy every once in a while, depending on the pony).
Social anxiety cliche.
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He is a quick, but thoughtful, thinker and happens to be very witty whenever he does speak up. He is known to talk to himself too.
Socially anxious pony is a deep thinker, talks to himself, and only speaks up when he's got a zinger locked and loaded...Hell, I do those things.
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Backstory: Blue Moon had a pretty normal life. He was born and raised in Ponyville, and had loving parents who cared for him. He didn't do a lot of things that were considered "cool" by his schoolmates, but he loved to read. He read quite a lot for a colt his age, and because of all that reading; he was fairly intelligent for his age and that intelligence continued to grow through his life.
So, most of everyone irl on this website.
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Throughout most of his younger years, he dreamt of becoming Princess Luna's number one assistant. This, however; never came true.
...I'm not sure whether to sin for pointless childhood dream that has no relavance whatsoever, or retract a sin for being one of the few that actually let their OC be reasonable in where they are in life. So I'll do both!
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Nonetheless, he was blessed with a lovely wife, Autumn, and a beautiful daughter, Clear Skies when he got older, and accepted that he would probably never become Luna's assistant. As of now, he is extremely happy living in a family, and would choose that over being Luna's assistant any day. They currently live in a home in Ponyville. He owns a shop for buying astronomy supplies such as telescopes, and due to his knowledge on astronomy; he usually can help anypony who wants or needs help on the matter.
Ah, he runs a store, has a family, and lives a happy life. This guy, while he isn't like those OC's that've 1v1'd Discord to save the omniverse, is still a generic-ass guy. Which can be good. Can be bad. It just depends on how you play him...But I'm sinning for referencing his childhood dream so many times.
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Also, if he wanted to be Luna's assistant when he was a foal, and he's old enough to have children and a business shop...Doesn't this mean he's at the very least five years older then Twilight, and if so, when he was a kid Luna was literally nothing more then a fairytale?
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Other: Nicknames: Blu, Blue, Bluey, Moon, or Moony.
Irreleavence is irrelavent. You can just occasionally have someone call him by a nickname without vocalizing it in his character page--gonna sin this, too.
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Sin count:
11.5
Sentence:
*drunroll*