FullmoonDagger

It looks really nice! It's a bit sad that you used lined paper tho. I like the shape of her back legs, they're different from the show while staying a bit close. The only problem I see is the body shape, her back is a bit too long and S shaped.

You would probably think more of a L-ish shape while drawing backs, The back slightly curved downright and the neck going up. If you want to get more close to the show style, I recommend you to use references for the proportions ( it's measured in heads, you can find some great tutorials online). If you want to get your own original style, go get some inspiration from what you like and build up your own proportions and shapes

But for a first finished drawing, it ROCKS ! (mine was way worst than yours xD )

This sent shivers donw my spine. Your voice is delicious.

you gave me feels, man. I hope she will be happy in cat's heaven, she really deserves it.