PonySwagg

ERMAGERD.. COOKIES AND MILK!!<3 U r mah huro. They aren't raisin either because raisin cookies are disgusting.. and thanks for all the feedback. (I've been a brony for a year now, so.. i've been a part of the herd for a while)

My Favourite Mane 6 Pony: Pinkie Pie How did you find MLP Forums?: Was just browsing on Google. How you became a fan of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic: Me and a friend were harassing this kid about watching it.. well not exactly harassing, more like questioning him about why he liked such a "repulsive" show. And he sent us over some episodes and we pretty much needed insulin on the spot because of diabeetus. I love writing, watching youtube videos, whoring out 10 hour tracks and most importantly: PONIES. I spend every second with ponies. I'm sitting in school with ponies. Sitting at home with ponies. At vacation with ponies. Addicted? Yes. Need rehab? Probably, I have waaay too many diabeetus attacks for comfort.

Okay, thanks for the criticism and yes. I did import it from a document and forgot to go back and indent. My mistake. I'll attempt to improve on the things you listed and i'll check back here later. ;D

I have spent a year or so writing novels, fanfics and short stories. This is my newest one, an attempt at a pony fic/short story. (In the future I plan on lengthening it and making it into a full story, but as of right now it's only a short story.) Autumn Leaves __________________________ The autumn leaves drift through the air slowly. Their descent is graceful, putting off a sense of wellbeing as if they were ready for this. Ready for their fall. Branches swayed in the slight wind and the animals rested. A once busy forest, now calming itself into a deep sleep. There was nothing in the forest that stood out; everything was perfect. Every slight shift was noted within the forest, imprinting the time into the already fallen leaves. Her breath was sharp and leaves crunched under her hooves as she sprinted along the trees. Slowing, she glanced behind her. Nothing but the dense forest. She sighed heavily, her heart untangling. Taking cover underneath a large oak tree, she recalled the past days events. None good. The past week had been utter chaos.. a dissapointment so undeniable that her mind could not comprehend. Yet.. she had endured. She fought her way out of the ruins of what was and left behind her life. For what? She didn't know the answer and she didn't care enough to figure it out. A slight fall rain began. Pattering on the leaves and the ground, exploding on impact. Her head bobbed and she slumbered underneath the wet oak tree. A brilliant flash of lightning and the following thunder shook her out of her unconcious state. The rain fell heavily now in large, thick beads. Glancing around, she remembered the events that occured merely hours ago. A single tear slid down her drenched face. Sobbing, she rose to her hooves. Trees swayed viciously in the bone-cutting wind and they seemed to threaten her. Thunder rolled through the forest. Lightning breifly flashed illuminating the orange leaves and the black as night sky. Her usually puffy and thick silver mane was matted to her back. Mud coated her entire body as she splashed through the puddles in the forest and her sobs became more abundant, nearly breaking into a full cry. She just wanted to get away as far as possible from the place she left. ~