visual art Attempt at a human

[Slice0Pie 815]

So, I am trying to learn how to draw humans, and I'm taking a little break from ponies ( well I'm trying to ) Anyways, I know it looks a little sucky, but I've improved, a little, like my past drawings of humans suck Anyways, critique is accepted, I would have drawn lineart to make it look nice, but I like the sketch better 

 

[碇 シンジン 27,431]

It really looks good! The hair looks really great! Body is maybe bit thin but I don't think that matters much. The face and the facial expression is great!