RainbowTashie 378 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 Was messing about with this one 4 Sig tweaked to perfection by Coby! My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Bronies-Pegasisters-and-Pok%C3%A9mon-masters/901873019878238 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catnet 9,358 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 Your OC has an interesting mane... It makes me sorta curious what her personality is like, though I can at least tell that she's kinda cute :3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[NULL] 906 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 (edited) If you're looking to improve, the last thing you want is for people to be too forgiving. There's no apparent construction judging from how flat the character looks, there's little to no C and S curves, no lines of action, only one wing is visible in these three quarter front angles for some reason, I can't see the inside of the character's mouth in drawing 2, the facial expressions seem restricted (especially in drawing 2), and either the perspective is off, or the pose is unbalanced. (Why are the back legs crossing in drawing 2? Why is the right foreleg longer than left foreleg in drawing 1?) Although I'm surprised you don't want people to talk about the hair colour. That should be the least of your worries at the moment. Edited January 12, 2015 by SpaceOnion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PRINCESS_FANTASIANA 252 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 I think your OC pony is cute anD sweet 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowTashie 378 January 12, 2015 Author Share January 12, 2015 If you're looking to improve, the last thing you want is for people to be too forgiving. There's no apparent construction judging from how flat the character looks, there's little to no C and S curves, no lines of action, only one wing is visible in these three quarter front angles for some reason, I can't see the inside of the character's mouth in drawing 2, the facial expressions seem restricted (especially in drawing 2), and either the perspective is off, or the pose is unbalanced. (Why are the back legs crossing in drawing 2? Why is the right foreleg longer than left foreleg in drawing 1?) Although I'm surprised you don't want people to talk about the hair colour. That should be the least of your worries at the moment. Thanks for the feedback I know there is a lot to be improved upon i only started drawing ponies last week so it's good to hear where i'm going wrong hopefully practice will make perfect Your OC has an interesting mane... It makes me sorta curious what her personality is like, though I can at least tell that she's kinda cute :3 Well when i was doodling her i wanted to try out a longer mane as well as an alternative sorta pony so i guess she has a bit of emo style without all of the depressing poop If you're looking to improve, the last thing you want is for people to be too forgiving. There's no apparent construction judging from how flat the character looks, there's little to no C and S curves, no lines of action, only one wing is visible in these three quarter front angles for some reason, I can't see the inside of the character's mouth in drawing 2, the facial expressions seem restricted (especially in drawing 2), and either the perspective is off, or the pose is unbalanced. (Why are the back legs crossing in drawing 2? Why is the right foreleg longer than left foreleg in drawing 1?) Although I'm surprised you don't want people to talk about the hair colour. That should be the least of your worries at the moment. Would you mind showing me some of your art work if that's not too much trouble it will give me something to aim for 1 Sig tweaked to perfection by Coby! My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Bronies-Pegasisters-and-Pok%C3%A9mon-masters/901873019878238 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[NULL] 906 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 (edited) Would you mind showing me some of your art work if that's not too much trouble it will give me something to aim for Sure. I probably should've done that to begin with. http://mlpforums.com/topic/115155-some-sketches/#entry3274718 You could also use screenshots from the show as references. To be honest, I haven't drawn much MLP, but the same principles apply to most cartoons. Edited January 12, 2015 by SpaceOnion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowTashie 378 January 12, 2015 Author Share January 12, 2015 Any better onion? Thanks for your help Sig tweaked to perfection by Coby! My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Bronies-Pegasisters-and-Pok%C3%A9mon-masters/901873019878238 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[NULL] 906 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 (edited) The character seems too disproportionate in comparison to how they are in the show. (Body too long, legs too short, eye too far back, and the top of the back ankle joint is stretched and pointed.) There still isn't any perspective (or at least consistent perspective). Before you draw something from another cartoon, you should break down the drawing, and learn how it's constructed, what the size releationships are, where the lines of action are/could be, etc. Maybe you should take a look at this. It's probably a better teaching tool than me: http://mlpforums.com/topic/102183-tutorial-and-reference-resource-center/ Edited January 12, 2015 by SpaceOnion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowTashie 378 January 12, 2015 Author Share January 12, 2015 It's cool i get it this clearly isn't how i'm gonna get my cutie mark. I'll try something else other than drawing breathing is good I like breathing Sig tweaked to perfection by Coby! My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Bronies-Pegasisters-and-Pok%C3%A9mon-masters/901873019878238 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NuclearBurg (Dawn) 622 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 Was messing about with this one Kind of reminds me of Harley Quinn. But cuter. You know. I was once 20% cooler. ONCE! It was pretty awesome... You should try it sometime .http://mlpforums.com/topic/123295-ask-nuclearburg-stuff-p/ ask me random stuff... Signature made by Starlight Glimmer. Thanks a bunch! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[NULL] 906 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 It's cool i get it this clearly isn't how i'm gonna get my cutie mark. I'll try something else other than drawing breathing is good I like breathing Nobody is expected to become a good drawer overnight. The only way you become good at drawing is by (as cliched as this sounds,) drawing over and over again. But if you really don't enjoy it or don't have the patience for it, I won't make you keep drawing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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