ConcorDisparate 385 January 18, 2015 Share January 18, 2015 (edited) Hi everypony ! Remember my last topic from yesterday ? Okay, I decided to try again, adding more and more effects while learning how to draw with gimp. Once again, don't be afraid to be critical, I'm still learning and I need some advise What do you think ? EDIT: Hopefully, I can redo some parts this time, and repost it fixed on this topic. Edited January 18, 2015 by ConcorDisparate 2 Signature made by Pucksterv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iris_ 136 January 18, 2015 Share January 18, 2015 Looks nice, but I think you should either make the outline darker or make the body color lighter. Right now the outline is really hard to see, so I can't really see his/her mouth for example. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ConcorDisparate 385 January 19, 2015 Author Share January 19, 2015 (edited) You're right . It is easier to see when clicking on it, though. Thanks for the feedback, I'll remember it for the next one. I don't have much time, but I think I can at least fix this and add some shine effects to make it look better. (EDIT: fixed the tail too) Edited January 19, 2015 by ConcorDisparate 2 Signature made by Pucksterv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neutral 1,185 January 19, 2015 Share January 19, 2015 This looks very good and I like it just keep practicing Credit to Rainbowdash72 for sig credit to Ivory for the amazing avatar credit to couleur for the wallpaper if your in hell keep going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ConcorDisparate 385 January 19, 2015 Author Share January 19, 2015 @@Neutral, Thank you ! Now I think I will try to draw a foal, because, in fact, it was supposed to be a foal(no cutie mark !). Yeah, that's currently not a foal at all 1 Signature made by Pucksterv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tao 7,972 January 19, 2015 Share January 19, 2015 Im liking the style! Has a animeish like feel a bit but you did some nice work on the shading! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ConcorDisparate 385 January 19, 2015 Author Share January 19, 2015 Thanks ! I'm currently working on a foal(apparently it's called a filly, well, whatever), I will try to make the eyes look better, and the whole face too if I find what's currently wrong. I hope it will be more... expressive ? Signature made by Pucksterv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iris_ 136 January 20, 2015 Share January 20, 2015 Looks better now thanks to the light. And good luck with your foal =p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ConcorDisparate 385 January 20, 2015 Author Share January 20, 2015 @@Iris_ Thanks ! It's almost finished, it looks fine for now, I think it will be uploaded tonight(in about 2hours). 2hours for an eye. I hate the perspectivity. Signature made by Pucksterv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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