OC opinions

[Tom Snyder 4,112]

Ok so i need an opinion on my OC, Candy Star. please do not hold back as i take this as being rude. So here she is:

 

 

 

 

Name: Candy Star

 

Age: 15

 

Species: Earth Pony

 

Cutie Mark: A mexican candy called, Konpeito, it represents her talent as a candy maker.

 

Personality: Candy Star is an energetic pony who's only goal in life is to meet others and hopefully make a living as a candy maker in her shop. Those that visit are a blessing to her and are given special treat, one of her newly created candies.

 

Backstory: Candy Star was born in Tall Tales, a city in which she has known for years, but her family, wanting the best for their daughter, set out to find a better place to raise her. They're choice? Ponyville. Here she could meet others her age and get along just fine with them. when she comes of age, she is taught some responsibility when her parents buy a store for her to work at. This store would be whatever she wanted it to be, and as they suspected, she chose a candy shop of all occupations. But they supported her goal and gave her everything she would need and left for Tall Tales again.

 

Hearing this, Candy Star felt sad, but knew it wasn't right to go back and try to live with them again, she was a grown mare and needed to act like one. Through those tough times, she persevered and made a living. Candy Star makes trips to see her parents countless times when she had to close shop for the day and is happy to learn they are on their business trips. 

 

Now with new friends, Candy Star pushes forward with her motto in tow: 

"Friends help each other, no matter what!"

 

 

 

Good & Bad Qualities:

 

 

- Candy Star's first flaw is that she can't stay out of another pony's business and intrudes when uninvited. This has caused a few ponies to avoid her in public, but she is still learning about what ponies don't like.​

 

- Candy Star is also quite the friend when you get to know her, as her friends can attest.

 

+ Candy Star can be a bit annoying when she gets even a little excited, Star Shine has seen this first hand and hates it when she becomes like that.

 

+ Candy Star helps others when they feel useless, but cheers them up with a few stories she makes up to get them in a better mood.

 

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That's all i have for her, just hope its enough. 

Edited January 25, 2015 by Candy Star

[Noei 718]

Pretty cool.

 

Kinda remind me of Pinkie pie. c:

Edited January 22, 2015 by Mademoiselle Noel

[Tom Snyder 4,112]

Yes, but she goes about meeting others gradually, not by rushing it like pinkie does. Her energetic side is considered what most ponies like about her, even going as far as to help Star Shine through her troubled past. PLus her voice would sound a bit lower than pinkie's, but i can't find anyone who can do it properly.

Edited January 22, 2015 by Candy Star

[Evil Nightmares 552]

I must say, i'm impressed with your OC. Which is rather rare for me. I enjoy her design, her mane really stands out. Her Backstory isn't overly complicated and fits well. Her personality is good, however, she is strikingly similar to Pinkie Pie, Which was the first thing that stood out to me. But i found her to an interesting character and would kinda like to see where you go with her. I also really appreciate you making her an earth pony (my opinion). I don't see to many earth ponies that peak my interest. So well done.

[Tom Snyder 4,112]

I must say, i'm impressed with your OC. Which is rather rare for me. I enjoy her design, her mane really stands out. Her Backstory isn't overly complicated and fits well. Her personality is good, however, she is strikingly similar to Pinkie Pie, Which was the first thing that stood out to me. But i found her to an interesting character and would kinda like to see where you go with her. I also really appreciate you making her an earth pony (my opinion). I don't see to many earth ponies that peak my interest. So well done.

Thank you   i try my hardest.

[Tom Snyder 4,112]

Yes I also usually find Earths boring, but this one is interesting. Even being reclusive, Lektra would by instinct want to be her friend because she likes sweets.

I also have her make these iridescent rock candies that she sells in the shop, if you're not familiar, this means they appear to change color if turned at an angle. Its kind of like the paint they use on a car to make it appear like two colors.

Edited January 25, 2015 by Candy Star

[Tom Snyder 4,112]

Well that's interesting. I know what rock candy is, but not familiar with that kind. I really find her interesting. Usually simple is bad IMO, but this one just seems to work out.

 

If Candy would supply the candy, Lektra could make her quite rich just by coming every day lol. That and automating her shop into some kind of mini factory. Oh man I smell a RP.

i do write fanfics. Candy Star is my persona, but the others are story related.

Edited January 25, 2015 by Candy Star