Read My Fanfic Please?

[Faerie Usul 7]

Its not quite finished yet, but I update it frequently. The title is My Lil' Pony: Vengeance is Magic. I would link to it, but Im not sure if outside links/sources are allowed here. You can easily find it on Google, though. It is an OC fic about a green pegasus pony named Brendalyn. What started out as a simple prank went way too far, a friend's wedding bells never ring, and 4 ponies meet their creator. Before she had to discover the magic of vengeance, Brendalyn was your average pony, her favorite thing to do was roam the streets a night with her friends. She is incredibly protective of Sunset Sparkle, her filly sister. But when her unicorn friend is killed, she dons a black catpony suit and goes on a Death Wish-style rampage through Las Pegasus.

 

If you bothered to google it and read it, whats your favorite part so far? What do you like/not like about it?

 

Here are some possible cons.

 

- Too much profanty

- Unintriguing content

- No canon characters

 

You may not feel that way, thats just a list of hypothetical complaints against the story.

 

You can see character profiles at my Deviantart page, my user is Unprotected-Hamster and they are in my Scraps.

 

Side note: Oh yeah, Ive had multiple people tell me this fic sounds a lot like the 1984 cult grindhouse flick Stree Savage. IT DOES NOT!

 

Thats all for now

[Rene 41]

I'd read it and give you feed back, but I've gotta go to bed soon. Maybe tomorrow.

(love you av by the way. I'm a neo fan as well)

Also outside linking is allowed. So link away!

[Silver Letter 1,832]

I might read it but if I do then I must warn that I actually give reviews. I don't just dislike and run like most people.

[Koukatsu 5,899]

Also outside linking is allowed. So link away!

The actual rule is that linking to fics and whatnot is fine, as long as they fall under what is considered SFW on a PG-13 forum.

 

@@Faerie Usul;

I glanced over the first two chapters, and not linking that is the right call. It's not a bad story, though it's also not my cup of tea, but in terms of the forum rules, linking it would break the NSFW rules. Good call on not doing so, bud.