Anon3mous1 2 April 7, 2012 Share April 7, 2012 I'm transporting a Brony US Marine from Afghanistan into post-apocalyptic Equestria. If that hasn't scared you off, yes, I am a serious, capable writer, and the first chapter is complete (aprox. 5000 words). Second chapter is WiP and beyond that it's just a flexible plot outline (this will likely be a long fic). I'm linking the document here, and it's completely open to edit (what the hay, I trust you guys). If your interested in being an editor/pre-reader, give me a shout. I'm hoping for someone to correct any grammar issues and give me opinions writing style and technical issues. Although I would be extremely grateful for any amount help someone can give me. https://docs.google.com/document/d/11XcDBx2lU7vbq3O6MihOOR-BY8R8wj7PEYwyO-GLHMQ/edit Although I will ask people not to vandalise the page, anyone should feel free to make edits if they feel they improve the story (I may or may not keep the edits). Also feel free to comment in this thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swordfishtrombone 384 April 7, 2012 Share April 7, 2012 I can do it, if you want. I'm uh, pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love Heart <3 6 April 7, 2012 Share April 7, 2012 Ask my BF (DJ clock work) Hes a great editor! and he's pretty devoted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anon3mous1 2 April 7, 2012 Author Share April 7, 2012 (edited) I can do it, if you want. I'm uh, pretty good. Have you read Fallout Equestria? Ask my BF (DJ clock work) Hes a great editor! and he's pretty devoted Cool, thanks. Uh, how do I contact him? Edited April 7, 2012 by Anon3mous1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swordfishtrombone 384 April 7, 2012 Share April 7, 2012 Should I? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love Heart <3 6 April 7, 2012 Share April 7, 2012 Have you read Fallout Equestria? Cool, thanks. Uh, how do I contact him? Well, I dont really know (Im new) But he is on the chat alot? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonshy 2,305 April 7, 2012 Share April 7, 2012 I know the way you represented it as them not caring about him being a brony, but my father is a Marine and they wouldn't be so accepting about it. That's just my personal experience with my father and his friends. EDIT: Not that they wouldn't be accepting, but that they would crack nasty jokes. P.S. Are you a Marine? Or someone you know? 1 Yeh Want to know how to get more page views? Click here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Talemage 47 April 7, 2012 Share April 7, 2012 You could ask me. I could will help. Twilight Sparkle is best pony, and I'm willing to explain logically for that to be true! By the way, mine and Twilight's personalities have a lot of similarities, maybe hardly any difference. I checked. -Bookworm in the greatest sense possible, writer, organized, introverted, intuitive, thinking, and perceiving- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anon3mous1 2 April 7, 2012 Author Share April 7, 2012 I know the way you represented it as them not caring about him being a brony, but my father is a Marine and they wouldn't be so accepting about it. That's just my personal experience with my father and his friends. EDIT: Not that they wouldn't be accepting, but that they would crack nasty jokes. P.S. Are you a Marine? Or someone you know? I thought when I said: Disclaimer: I am not, nor have I ever been associated with the military of any nation, nor do I have para-military training of any kind. I have never handled a firearm, been shot at, or watched someone die so I can’t claim to understand what it’s like to be a Marine That would be enough lol, but no, I'm not a Marine, I don't live in America, and the closest tie I have to the Military is that I sometimes go paintballing with a guy who was in my country's airforce at some point. So yeah, any pointers on what Marines are really like would be very helpful. I wasn't sure what route to take the Brony thing in - I suppose I could expand a bit more into the kinds of jokes they would make. Thanks. You could ask me. I could will help. Of course - I'd love you're help. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonshy 2,305 April 7, 2012 Share April 7, 2012 I thought when I said: Disclaimer: I am not, nor have I ever been associated with the military of any nation, nor do I have para-military training of any kind. I have never handled a firearm, been shot at, or watched someone die so I can’t claim to understand what it’s like to be a Marine That would be enough lol, but no, I'm not a Marine, I don't live in America, and the closest tie I have to the Military is that I sometimes go paintballing with a guy who was in my country's airforce at some point. So yeah, any pointers on what Marines are really like would be very helpful. I wasn't sure what route to take the Brony thing in - I suppose I could expand a bit more into the kinds of jokes they would make. Thanks. Of course - I'd love you're help. Sorry didn't read that stuff (Derp). Usually kinda vulgar, blunt insults though they aren't serious. I could explain it betterlater xD Yeh Want to know how to get more page views? Click here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anon3mous1 2 April 7, 2012 Author Share April 7, 2012 (edited) Sorry didn't read that stuff (Derp). Usually kinda vulgar, blunt insults though they aren't serious. I could explain it betterlater xD That's alright. Just out of interest, are you the same Dragonshy from Equestria Softworks? Edited April 7, 2012 by Anon3mous1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonshy 2,305 April 7, 2012 Share April 7, 2012 That's alright. Just out of interest, are you the same Dragonshy from Equestria Softworks? Eenope. Yeh Want to know how to get more page views? Click here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anon3mous1 2 April 7, 2012 Author Share April 7, 2012 Eenope. Just checking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonshy 2,305 April 7, 2012 Share April 7, 2012 Just checking. lol ok Yeh Want to know how to get more page views? Click here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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