video Pokemon Anime Retrospective Ep1 (Need Feedback)

[almozayaf 72]

These is my first Video ever, and i need same feedback,

1. What you think of my voice ?
2. What you think of my Video Editing ?
3. What you think of my Audio Editing ?
4. What you think of the topic ?
5. any other things ?

Feel free to say all what you want, i know i'm not that good i just start, but harsh feedback may help improving my self.

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0mTKi7rPx4A

 

[Vinyl Scratch (Filly)™ 936]

1. Not a clear enough mic. You sound pretty robotic with the way you speak, not a lot of emotion.

2. Not a lot to look at, it seems pretty basic.

3. Not very good, it seems like it is skipping a lot; with your talking.

4. Pokemon is great, the anime was amazing first few seasons and then went down the toilet.

5. Take short pauses between topic changes, and new sentences. You just talk non-stop, it'd be easy enough just to edit it.