LiraCrown 1,807 July 10, 2015 Share July 10, 2015 (edited) Wanted to try a few new things out, Never done any of the head this way before, ears, nose, mouth, mane, they're all pretty different compared to the other ways I have tried. Wish I had done the tail, wings and hind legs a bit different but meh, just keep learning. Did scootaloo cause shes one of my favorites and I had felt I still hadn't done her justice yet, I think this one did a pretty good job. Thoughts? Edited July 10, 2015 by LiraCrown 13 Eat More Books || Tribute To The Overlord - My In-Alpha Card Game || |||| Commission Meh || DeviantArt || Tumblr || Picarto |||| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lisa 5,553 July 10, 2015 Share July 10, 2015 I recommend drawing the irises and pupils bigger. At the moment it looks like she's shocked at something. (Maybe you were going for that look ;p) 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiraCrown 1,807 July 10, 2015 Author Share July 10, 2015 I recommend drawing the irises and pupils bigger. At the moment it looks like she's shocked at something. (Maybe you were going for that look ;p) Wasn't necessarily going for shocked or anything, I keep jumping around on how I do eyes. The fact that I did them smaller then 'average' was intentional but I definitely can see how it could give that kind of appearance. Thanks for the feedback. Eat More Books || Tribute To The Overlord - My In-Alpha Card Game || |||| Commission Meh || DeviantArt || Tumblr || Picarto |||| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyoshi Frost Wolf 41,997 July 10, 2015 Share July 10, 2015 I agree with Ika on that one, to me she looks kinda worried. Other than that, I love how you did this, it incredibly cute. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GuyNamedEarl 1,332 July 11, 2015 Share July 11, 2015 If you make the inner eye components bigger it would be better, but otherwise this looks really good. 1 Creator of MLP Ruined Vines and Recorder Sh*t Equestria's Biggest Hip-Hop Nerd Everyday is Leg Day! Follow me on Twitter: @EarlBrony Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiraCrown 1,807 July 11, 2015 Author Share July 11, 2015 Haha, apparently everypony collectively enjoys big ol' eyes XD Eat More Books || Tribute To The Overlord - My In-Alpha Card Game || |||| Commission Meh || DeviantArt || Tumblr || Picarto |||| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IcefireInfinite 227 July 11, 2015 Share July 11, 2015 I like it. It's a very nice and soft style and well done since you're trying something new. Some advice I have for future works would be for you to add more shadows to certain areas of your drawing. Several shadows could be added such as between Scoot's hair and leg, between her left legs, her hair and her forehead, and the upper, inner part of her top right leg. Great job so far. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiraCrown 1,807 July 11, 2015 Author Share July 11, 2015 I like it. It's a very nice and soft style and well done since you're trying something new. Some advice I have for future works would be for you to add more shadows to certain areas of your drawing. Several shadows could be added such as between Scoot's hair and leg, between her left legs, her hair and her forehead, and the upper, inner part of her top right leg. Great job so far. Ya, I planned to do shading when I started this but ended up being lazy and decided to leave it flat. Shading is something I do need to work on more for sure though. Thanks for the feedback! Eat More Books || Tribute To The Overlord - My In-Alpha Card Game || |||| Commission Meh || DeviantArt || Tumblr || Picarto |||| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlyingChicken 154 July 13, 2015 Share July 13, 2015 How come did I missed this? Well, it's a great piece. The way you drew her mouth made things look a bit weird like she was nervous or something. You should try to draw it in one line though. (How could I wrote a critic on someone's work when I'm not a very good artist myself!?) Anyway, I love it and you definitely earned another watch on Deviantart from me. 1 My DA gallery! Click above! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shy0wl 484 July 13, 2015 Share July 13, 2015 She looks so cute there awesome job! I like her big poofy ears 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiraCrown 1,807 July 13, 2015 Author Share July 13, 2015 (How could I wrote a critic on someone's work when I'm not a very good artist myself!?) Anyway, I love it and you definitely earned another watch on Deviantart from me. Movie critics do it all the time. I don't believe many of them have even recorded video on their phones... But I love all feedback just the same. Thanks And doubly-thanks for the DA follow. She looks so cute there awesome job! I like her big poofy ears Thank you, Im not used to doing them like that but I think I like it. 1 Eat More Books || Tribute To The Overlord - My In-Alpha Card Game || |||| Commission Meh || DeviantArt || Tumblr || Picarto |||| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MallyTheAwesome 38 July 13, 2015 Share July 13, 2015 D'aw! It's so cute! Keep up the good work! 1 puppies ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grepper 3,193 July 15, 2015 Share July 15, 2015 I think it's a pretty decent art style, overall. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ziggy + Angel + Rain 11,303 July 15, 2015 Share July 15, 2015 I like it. I think you did a good job with it. 1 "It uses the faculty of what you call imagination. But that does not mean making things up. It is a form of seeing." - from "The Amber Spyglass" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiraCrown 1,807 July 15, 2015 Author Share July 15, 2015 D'aw! It's so cute! Keep up the good work! I think it's a pretty decent art style, overall. I like it. I think you did a good job with it. Thank all threes of ya. Glad all ya'll ponies are liking this one. =D 2 Eat More Books || Tribute To The Overlord - My In-Alpha Card Game || |||| Commission Meh || DeviantArt || Tumblr || Picarto |||| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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