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i like the over done design,  normally I dont dig red and white hair but she pulls it off!

Thanks! I wouldn't normally put the red and white together too, but it worked out well

 

Sorry for the poor quality by the way :please:

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Well I could do a "rough" pic of her for you to use till you find something or will do something better. Also they  a TON of good to out of this world art who would lend you a open hoof. ^_^

 

Example: jewelone_zpspfgugb5d.png

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Well I could do a "rough" pic of her for you to use till you find something or will do something better. Also they  a TON of good to out of this world art who would lend you a open hoof. ^_^

 

Example: sig-3949375.jewelone_zpspfgugb5d.png

Thank you! That helps a lot!

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The backstory is certainly interesting (names wise I am not a big fan but it is still good).

 

Just a suggestion: You mentioned that Sparks Freedom and her twin are princesses, right? I guess a high school based backstory doesn't seem to fit that context, I am just recommending maybe that she could have a story that inspired hope to a very close friend (or her twin) and that helped them to get their mark and just when she was feeling down, she was told how much her speech meant to them and then she discovered her mark.

 

Design: Colour means a lot to a character, especially in MLP. I guess it is best to define who she is first but if you want to keep the red white, I think you can incorporate why is she a "red-white" character in the backstory.

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My RP OCs: Melke the catSyo the feline explorer, Saber the feral pony

Check out my art stuff at deviantart or request something from my request shop.

 

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The backstory is certainly interesting (names wise I am not a big fan but it is still good).

 

Just a suggestion: You mentioned that Sparks Freedom and her twin are princesses, right? I guess a high school based backstory doesn't seem to fit that context, I am just recommending maybe that she could have a story that inspired hope to a very close friend (or her twin) and that helped them to get their mark and just when she was feeling down, she was told how much her speech meant to them and then she discovered her mark.

 

Design: Colour means a lot to a character, especially in MLP. I guess it is best to define who she is first but if you want to keep the red white, I think you can incorporate why is she a "red-white" character in the backstory.

Sorry if the princess thing was confusing; I said they age like princesses. I like your idea for the inspiration to her twin much better than my backstory. Thanks!

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Sorry if the princess thing was confusing; I said they age like princesses. I like your idea for the inspiration to her twin much better than my backstory. Thanks!

 

Oh I see, thanks for clearing that up.

 

Your welcome about the idea. I find that most people tend to go for a massive moment in the spotlight story for their cutie marks but I think that something small would also suffice with a good amount of sentimental value for the character. 

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My RP OCs: Melke the catSyo the feline explorer, Saber the feral pony

Check out my art stuff at deviantart or request something from my request shop.

 

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