I'll try to help make your OC better!

[Love Doctor Blaze 536]

I'd love to hear your thoughts two of my OCs: Autumn and Blue Moon. Improving them would be nice.

 

Both their character profiles' links can be found below in my signature. Thanks!

 

 

Blue Moon. Interesting OC. He shares my love for astronomy and my stubborness so i can relate to him

His cutiemark is nice and descriptive. You even descriped how he got it 

His personality is also descriptive and it has a decent length

His backstory is pretty good, not very exciting but gives me a good idea of what has happened through the course of his life

 

Over all a Blazing seal of aprooval! Well done

Can you check my oc Serenity crescent and ethan crescent?

Ethan Crescent. Alright so while i was reading about your OC i had alot of questions regarding him. two of them were: Why does he have combat skills? Why did twilight teach him that? But other then that your personality was decent. Your backstory needs to have alot more explanations. Also that dragon part got me kind of confused 

 

I'll give your character my Potential seal of potentiality

[Flamestreak1990 1,172]

Sorry I got a bit carried with the video games but yeah will fix it thanks

[Guest]

I need a second perspective I guess

[Chaton 3,765]

Hai

 

https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/scarlett-fidelity-cps-r8402

 

Everyone I've rp'd with are happy with her character. I think that's the right link, I have two and one has more detail than the other.

[Tao 7,756]

So what do you think of Soot: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/soot-r7879

[Love Doctor Blaze 536]

I need a second perspective I guess

Can i have a link to your OC please?

[Guest]

it's in my signature, its in the same roleplay as you too o.o

[Love Doctor Blaze 536]

Hai

 

https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/scarlett-fidelity-cps-r8402

 

Everyone I've rp'd with are happy with her character. I think that's the right link, I have two and one has more detail than the other.

Scarlett Fidelty. Alright, your character was interesting to read about. She is probably the first interesting 'fighter' i have read about

Her cutiemark is genius, personality is long and descriptive, just how i like it

Backstory was really long and detailed, which i also aproove of

I can't find any flaws in this character.

 

So you'll get my blazing seal of aprooval. Well done

it's in my signature, its in the same roleplay as you too o.o

Sorry. On mobile forgot about sigs

it's in my signature, its in the same roleplay as you too o.o

Alright. Enzo is a fresh character, who looks like he has potential to do some really fun stuff in RP's

And your character is the first OC that is relativly serious, but goofy at the same time.

Your personality was good, but i think you should take all your sentences and put them together. But that doesn't affect your score.

Backstory was a fresh one as well. And while it was fun, it unfortunately lagged information that backstories need. Like why is he acting like he is? There needs to be an explanation for that.

 

But other than that little thing, i found none errors what so ever.

 

Blazing seal aprooval. Good job

[Stardust* 3,302]

I just did mine today, it is in my signature. It will be interesting to get feedback.

[Chaton 3,765]

Scarlett Fidelty. Alright, your character was interesting to read about. She is probably the first interesting 'fighter' i have read about

Her cutiemark is genius, personality is long and descriptive, just how i like it

Backstory was really long and detailed, which i also aproove of

I can't find any flaws in this character.

 

So you'll get my blazing seal of aprooval. Well done

 

Sorry. On mobile forgot about sigs

 

Alright. Enzo is a fresh character, who looks like he has potential to do some really fun stuff in RP's

And your character is the first OC that is relativly serious, but goofy at the same time.

Your personality was good, but i think you should take all your sentences and put them together. But that doesn't affect your score.

Backstory was a fresh one as well. And while it was fun, it unfortunately lagged information that backstories need. Like why is he acting like he is? There needs to be an explanation for that.

 

But other than that little thing, i found none errors what so ever.

 

Blazing seal aprooval. Good job

 

Yay!

 

And thank god you actually spelt it with two t's. Most people ignore the second one.

[Love Doctor Blaze 536]

I just did mine today, it is in my signature. It will be interesting to get feedback.

 

Stardust. Wow you did a very good job for your first time I really liked your backstory and your characters design. (Very cute  )

But there were some things i had issues with. In the cutiemark section you forgot to add what your cutiemark means, and i feel like you could expand the personality section as well. I didn't get a good grip of the character because of that.

 

But overall well done! You'll get my Diamond seal of aprooval