Ruhisu 1,134 October 14, 2015 Share October 14, 2015 (edited) Meet Delicate Jay.She was Brave Wing's little sister. Brave Wing: By "was" I mean the sad fact that she died in the age of 11 while her brother was in Equestrian Airforce Academy. Brave Wing was born in Manehattan in the year of 1986 Equestrian Time, 3 months after the magical disaster in far away Chernohoovsk. The toxic magical cloud had reached the Equestrian East border leading ponies to take special medicine to avoid radiation side effects. Brave Wing was born with deformed right wing which grounded him forever making him to live like an earth pony, however he didn't forego his dreams about flying and did all the best to become a jet pilot. When Delicate Jay was born, Brave Wing was already 6 years old however she didn't have such luck like her brother and her organism wasn't so resistant as her brother's, therefore she was very weak and almost couldn't move on her own, that's why she had to be transported everywhere on wheelchair and and take medicines via drip every day. For her own good, the family decided to move from crowded and noisy Manehattan to a florist-gastronomical farm about 110 miles west from the city. Despite her illness, Jay was a very cheerful filly. One of her most favorite hobbies was bird watching but she loved spending time with her older brother most of all. Every day when Brave Wing was at home, they were playing under old oak which grown about 300 meters from their farm to this day. Her brother served a major role model in her life. She was so enthusiastic for his dreams about becoming a pilot and was so impressed by his will to fight his natural obstacle that she was cheering him as best as she could and silently believed that someday she will recover. That's why one day they both promised to each other that when Brave Wing will finally become a pilot, they will take an evening flight above their farm, watching the orange sky from above clouds. Unfortunately when she was 11 years old, her illness gotten worse and she died when her brother was attending the pre-final flight tests. Despite a great loss and sadness, Brave Wing decided that he won't give up and won't throw their promise away, that's why he was working even harder to become not only one of the best pilots in EADF (Equestrian Air Defence Forces), but the very best stallion and person. His family-oriented nature evolved and he promised himself, that in the memory of his beloved sister, one day he will take a pony he love for the same evening flight as he wanted with her, and this future pony will be Applejack and later on their daughter Wild Tempest: Also once she was Brave's beloved little sister, because of her big ribbon, character and colours, he saw her in Applebloom what resulted in the warm relationship between Brave Wing and CMC since he wanted to treat them as his sisters. And here's Delicate Jay: Edited October 14, 2015 by Ruhisu 3 My OC's: Brave Wing - https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/brave-wing-r9306 My DeviantART: http://ruhisu.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PROJECT: Simon 3,955 October 14, 2015 Share October 14, 2015 I almost cried while imagining and listening to a sad song xD ;~; Keep up.. <3 Equestria Girl Artist / Infernus's adorable brother / PROJECT: Echo, My Little Kohai Having a bad day? Come relax in my profile, I'll try my best to make you at least smile a bit.. http://project-simon.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kenshiro 13,498 October 14, 2015 Share October 14, 2015 Actully the part of meeting AJ should be a little longer and explanatory however its a very good story, i must congratulate you.I enjoyed the story while i was reading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruhisu 1,134 October 14, 2015 Author Share October 14, 2015 I may describe the story. It was not my plan to do it while porting the picture My OC's: Brave Wing - https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/brave-wing-r9306 My DeviantART: http://ruhisu.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redshell 195 October 14, 2015 Share October 14, 2015 Great job you made me almost cried reading this Nothing is True, everything is permitted Sasori of the Akatsuki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruhisu 1,134 October 14, 2015 Author Share October 14, 2015 Thanks all I may publish a more broad story sometime if you like 1 My OC's: Brave Wing - https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/brave-wing-r9306 My DeviantART: http://ruhisu.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kenshiro 13,498 October 14, 2015 Share October 14, 2015 Thanks all I may publish a more broad story sometime if you like Of course we would like to see more of your stories Ruhisu =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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