My music!

[SiraBurn 1]

I'm a Pegasister YouTuber who sings! Here is one of the songs I posted on my Channel today, you should find more on my Channel!

[Odyssey 5,719]

Hello @SiraBurn,

 

Since you're showcasing work that is made by you, I have moved your topic to a section meant for that sort of stuff -- Fan Music.

[Electron 39]

You definitely need a better microphone, that part at 01:03 is just painful for ears. 

[BoomBlocks 26]

I agree electron new mic needed other than its good.

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

Ok. 

 

It's a very nice start. However, you gotta project your voice out more. It's sounding to wispy and windy, like the note could fade and only exhalation could be heard. Sing a little louder and watch those vibratos. Try not to stick them in on every note. They are decent vibratos though, but you're using them a little too much. 

 

Also, make sure you're actually singing all of the time, because sometimes, when you hit a note, it sounds more like you're speaking it, rather than singing it. You gotta hold the pitch and not let it go too soon. You must hit notes directly so that way, they could resound. 

 

On the technical side, you may need a clearer mic. The mids and highs are getting in a little bit too much. Try to find a balanced mic that equalizes all frequencies of the spectrum. 

 

All in all, it's a very good cover, but it could always be improved.