twilight24 323 November 21, 2015 Share November 21, 2015 Hi there ! I am gong to have a pony custom made. I would like her different but similar to Pen Quile who's shy, nervous, quiet , reserved , and nice, sweet, and loves to write. I think I'd like her to be the inbdiment of a muse. Writing inspiration . But I'm trying to figure lit a good color scheme , names, cutie mark , and personality. Hers her bullet points I can come up with -nice, somwhat shy but more riddled with anxiety and has aspergers. -shows generosity and can be wise, handles the dreams of artists and writers. -likes anime, cartoons, philosophical books , and is either a huflenpuff or ravenclaw -poetry and books are the ways to her heart -bisexual -is able to enter dreams or help inspire 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SugarfootWillie 383 November 21, 2015 Share November 21, 2015 since she is a writer, does she use an archaic or broad vocabulary? What sort of diction does she have? My two OC's speak in dramatic monologues and skaldic poetry. Does your OC have any quirks like mine? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Duderino 879 November 21, 2015 Share November 21, 2015 If she can enter dreams, then she would have to be a unicorn. I think dream walking is a little too much unless you can successfully make her really powerful without creating a mary sue. You would have to come up with a really good explanation for how she can do that. I like the rest. I think it might work if her color scheme was fairly neutral, but then you also have something about her appearance that really pops. A neutral color scheme would show her shy nature, but whatever you do that makes her appearance pop will also embody the muse aspect. Does that make any sense? That's just my opinion. You could go a lot of directions with this character. 1 My ponysona/OC: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/treble-r8882 Check out my Soundcloud too: https://soundcloud.com/colton-paul-crawford DeviantArt: http://scottish-bastard.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilight24 323 November 21, 2015 Author Share November 21, 2015 since she is a writer, does she use an archaic or broad vocabulary? What sort of diction does she have? My two OC's speak in dramatic monologues and skaldic poetry. Does your OC have any quirks like mine? Hmm broader language , poetic verses sometimes , uses simple yet not common words, such as I tired of riff-raff, rough , dirt smeared miscreants bothering me. If she can enter dreams, then she would have to be a unicorn. I think dream walking is a little too much unless you can successfully make her really powerful without creating a mary sue. You would have to come up with a really good explanation for how she can do that. I like the rest. I think it might work if her color scheme was fairly neutral, but then you also have something about her appearance that really pops. A neutral color scheme would show her shy nature, but whatever you do that makes her appearance pop will also embody the muse aspect. Does that make any sense? That's just my opinion. You could go a lot of directions with this character. Would grey with a brown mane be unique and neutral ? I think you're right. I would like her to be a earth pony who knowb ones believes can be as compelling as the most elite and smart but is good with helping others with ideas 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SugarfootWillie 383 November 21, 2015 Share November 21, 2015 If she can enter dreams, then she would have to be a unicorn. I think dream walking is a little too much unless you can successfully make her really powerful without creating a mary sue. You would have to come up with a really good explanation for how she can do that. I like the rest. In human modern and ancient magick both dream walking is a basic skill, why would a unicorn need to be powerful in order to this? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilight24 323 November 21, 2015 Author Share November 21, 2015 In human modern and ancient magick both dream walking is a basic skill, why would a unicorn need to be powerful in order to this? She's probably going to end up a earth pony cx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Duderino 879 November 21, 2015 Share November 21, 2015 (edited) Would grey with a brown mane be unique and neutral ? I think you're right. I would like her to be a earth pony who knowb ones believes can be as compelling as the most elite and smart but is good with helping others with ideas Yea, grey and brown are very neutral. It can be other colors too, you just make them less bright. You can easily mix grey into any color to make it pop less. In human modern and ancient magick both dream walking is a basic skill, why would a unicorn need to be powerful in order to this? I just think that it would make sense for her to be a unicorn because Luna seems to be the only one in the show who can easily pull it off. The show seems to portray dream walking as something not just any pony can learn easily. I just think it would be a little more lore friendly and less mary sue-ish. She's probably going to end up a earth pony cx If you think you can make it work, though, go for it! Edited November 21, 2015 by McDude My ponysona/OC: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/treble-r8882 Check out my Soundcloud too: https://soundcloud.com/colton-paul-crawford DeviantArt: http://scottish-bastard.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilight24 323 November 21, 2015 Author Share November 21, 2015 Yea, grey and brown are very neutral. It can be other colors too, you just make them less bright. You can easily mix grey into any color to make it pop less. I just think that it would make sense for her to be a unicorn because Luna seems to be the only one in the show who can easily pull it off. The show seems to portray dream walking as something not just any pony can learn easily. I just think it would be a little more lore friendly and less mary sue-ish. If you think you can make it work, though, go for it! I like brown for her coat and grey for here hair. I like earth ponies the best and that's why I'm going to make it a earth pony. I think I could somewhat pull it off but not well enough yet , thanks for your encouragement 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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