CGI Animated Non-MLP Related Series Featuring Horses/Unicorns/Pegasi

[DaringDoNot 39]

I have this little idea in my head about a CG animated series starring a yellow girl with an orange nose. Blue hair, and a denim dress that has a red horse wth a nappy yarn-like mane and tail called Red Pony, a forest green pegasus with gold shimmery mane and tail and mint hooves that wears fake Khaki polo called Pegasus ( original I know their names are supposed to be generic. He sounds like the Bed Intruder Song guy. They have a series of adventures on different topics each short episode. In the first one they learn about imagination, in another love and tolerance, and they get sucked in a video game in another, and one is about nutrition/veganism. There is profanity, and quite a bit but I'm trying to figure out how to still make it funny without so much swearing. Swearing is a normal part of any non-childrens programming, but this doesn't need as much as it has.

 

I developed the one about healthful eating the farthest, and here's some dialogue. Basically there's a pink unicorn in this one loosely based off Pinkamena and Cupcakes. She starts taking about some brainwashing crap about how Veganism is always healthier than meat eating ( not trying to start a debate), and it gets weird from there. Pegasus ends up possibly being turned into cupcakes by the unicorn. The bag of vegetables starts singing, and Pegasus repeats " this *** ain't funny" and Pinky ( the unicorn) replies " yes it is" each time. Pegasus kicks the camera, and when his eyes open we see Pinky's giant grin, Pegasus tied to a table wearing a hospital gown and while the cheesy song continues, we briefly see Pinky cutting into Pegasus's flank, though these equines have no cutie marks or anything similar. We get back to the song, some weird crap happens, and next thing we know Yellow girl has cupcakes with green and yellow icing surrounding her, when Pegasus comes back, flanks with chunks missing, and half cut wings and the dialogue goes like this

 

Pegasus: " Why the hell didn't you come help me I know you know there was something shady Goin on up in here you heard that cell phone ring."

 

Yellow Girl: I thought that meant not to come help you!

 

Pegasus: What did you think that was hotline bling?

 

Red Pony: That was me on the other end I tried to save both your ****s but Pegasus fell for it and got out the food stamps. I just bounced.

 

That was just a snip of the scene and dialogue what do you think of the show's whole concept?

[Jeric 46,851]

@DaringDoNot, I am moving this to one of the Creative Resource forums for further input. The idea has a lot of Grimdark potential, just be mindful not to post additional concepts that push the NSFW Gore level of descriptions.