video Games Taking Flight: Bird of Light Review

[Seraph 128]

I just started a review series called Games Taking Flight and I reviewed a game in video form for the first time

 

 

Any feedback would be appreciated. 

Edited August 12, 2016 by Seraph

[Whirlwind 1,059]

Hmm. Good luck with your "Games Taking Flight" Series.

Though since you wanted feedback, I think you could use a little more work into energy. 
Your dialogue is fine. But I think it would be 20% cooler if you had a bit more energy into it

[Seraph 128]

Hmm. Good luck with your "Games Taking Flight" Series.

Though since you wanted feedback, I think you could use a little more work into energy. 

Your dialogue is fine. But I think it would be 20% cooler if you had a bit more energy into it

Thank you for the feedback, I didn't initially expect to get any here, so I'm glad I checked in on the post. I'm a naturally calm person so I try to convey an easy going even tone in my reviews, but I will put more energy in future reviews, since this one just tired me out recording wise. This was a hard game to review and I tried to be constructive but there was very little to praise and that takes it out of me, because even in my previous "Worst Games List" I had something positive to say about the majority of those games.

 

This, barely enough to fill up a paragraph, all that footage is my own by the way so I played even more to capture the footage for the video. 

 

In the future I'll have a bit more energy in my reviews, this is just sort of a test run (Which was effective judging by the comment thread from the developer that happened which was later deleted by him where he was incredibly angry at me), since I'll be playing some wonderful titles that don't drain my soul.

 

Thank you so much for watching!

[Whirlwind 1,059]

Thank you for the feedback, I didn't initially expect to get any here, so I'm glad I checked in on the post. I'm a naturally calm person so I try to convey an easy going even tone in my reviews, but I will put more energy in future reviews, since this one just tired me out recording wise. This was a hard game to review and I tried to be constructive but there was very little to praise and that takes it out of me, because even in my previous "Worst Games List" I had something positive to say about the majority of those games.

 

This, barely enough to fill up a paragraph, all that footage is my own by the way so I played even more to capture the footage for the video. 

 

In the future I'll have a bit more energy in my reviews, this is just sort of a test run (Which was effective judging by the comment thread from the developer that happened which was later deleted by him where he was incredibly angry at me), since I'll be playing some wonderful titles that don't drain my soul.

 

Thank you so much for watching!

No problem dude!And like I said,

Hopefully the Series goes well

Edited August 22, 2016 by Captain Whirlwind