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"I was just going to sketch up a couple of parachutes or something and use my magic, but if your going to pull a rope out of nowhere, that's fine!" Draw shouted back. He grabbed the rope. "Coming?" He asked the red mare.


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Peeps smiled at Draw and scampered forward to grab the rope and slide down ahead of the magical green unicorn. She splashed a little in the water beside Cloud and smiled again. She was uneasy but "This could be fun," she thought and swam toward the dry ground keeping an eye out for the return of the guards.


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  • 2 weeks later...

((OH GOD WHY I'M SO SORRY))

The Doctor answered him, never taking his eyes off of the god of chaos.

"He's here to help us."

He trotted along into the shop, followed closely by the serpentine being who kept spawing raondom objects.

"Discord, stop that."

He stopped suddenly, almost making the gincarnation of disharmony lose balance, having grown accostumed to moving alongside him.

"Ah! Here we are."

The Doctor extracted a strange device from one of the boxes, a ball of lights and wires. It was off.

"Discord, where's the key?"

"Oh, Doctor, you never spoke of giving you the key."

The Doctor frowned.

"I don't have time for this."

Discord chuckled.

"Oh, Doctor, you've seen me in so many forms, yet you still don't know?"

His voice took a tone of mistery as the room faded into shadows and the Dracoqueenus backed away out of sight.

"There's always time for a guardian."

He laughed maniacally, as six hidden doors opened to reveal several Pegasis stautes.

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The Doctor, for the first time since Prince met him, turned in irritation and rudely told him: "Shut up, Prince."

He was obviously incredibly annoyed about something, but before Prince could ask what it was, he pointed his screwdriver at the Angels and destroyed them.

"Listen up, Black Guardian!!"

Discord appeared before him, chuckling.

"It's been a while since you called me that, Doctor."

The Time Lord didn't lose any time.

He grabbed the spirit by the beard and looked into his eyes.

"Listen up, you misassembled circus freak, I don't have time for games. I've lost enough time as it is and I know you're not nearly as powerful as your previous embodiments. You are everything I despise, everything I stand against and I won't think twice about ending your life. So, either give me the key of Rassilon, or prepare to become a pigion toilet once again."

The spirit said nothing for a few seconds, even after yet he stallion left his beard go, still dazed by his words. He then groaned and snapped his fingers, revealing a floppy disk-like artifact on a necklace around Prince's neck.

"You've really become a bore, Doctor."

The Doctor pushed Prince outside, not even turning back as he exited himself.

"Desperate times call for desperate measures."

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Pencil was looking over to Twilight, clearly the possibility of her being dead was a little bit scary for her.

He manned up and placed his hoof and her left shoulder

"Lo-look, the truth is a couldn't bare a-anything happening to you... th-there are just some things that i need to protect..."

Pencil sighed quietly

"Y-you are one of those things..."


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Pencil attempted to smile, but hdad a hard time doing so

"We-well... ... do you believe in love at first sight?"


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Twilight blushed furiously and looked away, giggling.

"I... I dunno... I mean, I'm flattered, but... I don't even know you, and... And the Doctor..." she blushed a little more, and in that instant, Pencil's world shattered.

----

The Doctor led Prince through the busy streets, taking him to the only part of the sub-town that wasn't covered.

He put down the gizmo and inserted the key in a slot, causing the lights to turn on and for it to emit a Low hum.

He turned to Prince.

"I need you to blast it with magic."

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Pencil's left eye began to twitch.

The messages that Twilight had just given him had torn a hole in his already broken psyche. All his thoughts were happening at once, and they sounded like quite murmurs in his rushing head. Electricity sparked in his eye, and urges of rage and revenge flooded his instinct's.

He twitched his eye once more before he shook his head off

"Well, thank you for listening"

Pencil left it at that before he got up and left, resisting the urge to look back at Twilight

 

He went off to a quite hallway, where no one could see or hear him. He simply broke down and began to cry, cry like someone really close to him had just died. Who knows? In his mind they probably did


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Twilight looked at Pencil awkwardly while he walked away. Somehow, she felt like she bucked up the whole situation.

She got up and walked to her old room.

She remembered the first time she met the Doctor: he had saved her and Ponyville from certain destruction because of a mess she made and still managed to be so kind to her. He offered her a room on the TARDIS so she could rest and they went in so many places, and, and... She shook her head of her thoughts as she entered her room.

Something was off. A rainbow-coloured thing charging at her, to be precise.

She screamed, as she tumbled down the TARDIS corridor.

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Cloud sensed something. Pencil... was... no, he wasn't going to think about it right now. He took a huge breath, and jumped. He charged through the wall, ran over flat 3 changelings, and blasted through the fourth wall into the generator. He started pulsing dark energy. He also started sending mental feelings to Pencil. It was like trying to sow up metal with a needle and thread, but he needed to do something, and soon, or else something bad would happen...

 

BOOM! The generator exploded. Distraction made. Time to go. He started sprinting towards the exit, blasting all guards that got in his way. when outside, he grabbed the other two and teleported back to base.

 

Back at base, he ran towards pencil's postition. He saw him crying. "Pencil, are you alright...?"

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Pencil wipe off his checks and eyes, then growled until he was no longer crying

He began to speak, in between soft whimpers:

"I'm fine... it's only that the last light in my life has dimmed"

He began to cry again shortly afterwards, this time louder than before


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Draw was at a loss of words as to what just transpired. Seeing Cloud practically demolish everything, he thought, "Perhaps I won't need to do much fighting after all." When they got back to the TARDIS, he saw Cloud run off and wondered where he was off to in such a hurry. He thought it better just to let him go, believing it might be a personal matter (but perhaps it was a bit more out of fear).

Seeing that they were alone, Draw resumed the conversation he was having with Peeps before Cloud interrupted. "I still didn't get your name before, well, THAT happened." he said, gesturing behind him.


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"Twilight?" Cloud asked suddenly. "Is that the issue?" He started sending mental messages to him, to see if he could start to wield that hole in his heart together. "I don't think you are OK... Vent. Go ahead. I'm here. Attack, whatever. I find yelling and attacking things very satisfying sometimes."

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Pencil replied angrily through his tears:

"You wouldn't appreciate the things i do to my victims...especially with my current mindset..."


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Pencil replied angrily through his tears:

"You wouldn't appreciate the things i do to my victims...especially with my current mindset..."

 

"Go ahead... I block really well, and what I don't block, my energy will. Just go." Cloud's voice rose. "Or are you one of those idiotic pigheads that I have to verbally insult in order to help them?"

(Sorry if insulted... I'm trying to provoke a fight.)

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(Why would i be offended, it's only a fictional conflict between two fictional characters... within another fiction... of a fiction... there's about 3-4 layers of fiction-ception here)

At that, Pencil suddenly stopped in rage.

His eyes began to dilate and shine an unnatural red. the pupils shrank down to the smallest size they could, and the tears seemed to evaporate off of his checks.

With a shine of his horn, he picked up Cloud with his telekinesis and began to stretch his body out. His flesh felt like it was tearing, and his skeleton felt like it was on the verge of breaking. All the time the air vibrating and a low-pitch humming noise being emitted by the magic.

It wasn't like Pencil to give into anger this easily, but... he was having a rough day.

All he was doing himself was starring in the other direction, with his upper lip twitching slightly


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(Why would i be offended, it's only a fictional conflict between two fictional characters... within another fiction... of a fiction... there's about 3-4 layers of fiction-ception here)

At that, Pencil suddenly stopped in rage.

His eyes began to dilate and shine an unnatural red. the pupils shrank down to the smallest size they could, and the tears seemed to evaporate off of his checks.

With a shine of his horn, he picked up Cloud with his telekinesis and began to stretch his body out. His flesh felt like it was tearing, and his skeleton felt like it was on the verge of breaking. All the time the air vibrating and a low-pitch humming noise being emitted by the magic.

It wasn't like Pencil to give into anger this easily, but... he was having a rough day.

All he was doing himself was starring in the other direction, with his upper lip twitching slightly

 

(You must consider he has powerful magic)

He twisted, breaking free of the spell. His back was going to hurt for the next few days. He took out his claymore, established a dark shield to protect himself, a illusion spell so that it felt like whatever PJD did happened in his eyes, but that it didn't show. "I can tell you aren't a wuss when it comes to inflicting pain, then?

(I now understand the signature. Nice. Is his psyche really that shattered?)

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The Doctor entered the TARDIS.

"Hello fellas, you back already from th-- Whate the bloody hell is going on?!"

Pencil stared at the Doctor, but before he could open his mouth, a rainbow streak broke into the room, crashing into the Time Lord.

Twilight ran after it.

"Doctor, look! It's..."

"Hello, miss Dash."

The rainbow maned pegasus opened her eyes only to realize she was laying on the stallion.

She quickly regained her posture, obviously annoyed rather than embarassed.

"I knew it! I knew this all had to do with you! What've you done now!?"

Before she knew it, she was strangling him, while he made choking noises and murmuring something about his unaveilability of two throats.

"Dash! Stop! He's helping us!"

"Twi, I know you have a crush on him, but he's probably the one who caused it in the first place!"

Everypony in the room stopped and stared at Twilight, who blushed and looked at her hooves.

Rainbow looked around dumbfounded, even letting go of the Doctor.

"Oh, right... He... Didn't know..."

Just then, the Doctor realized two things:

One, Agoun was missing;

Two, Pencil wanted to kill him.

Thr latter propmted him to run. And considering his centuries of training, he could run pretty darn fast.

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