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The Doctor chuckled.

"First impression is the one that counts, Doodle."

He set himself to the console of the TARDIS.

"We're still missing a few ponies, but I need to see if they're ready before we can go."

He sat on a chair, his back hooves on the main console.

"Rooms are where you last left them. Also, mind giving Cloud Dreamer a tour?"

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Draw regretted his decision to walk about the streets randomly while looking like he was searching for something. A couple of ponies had started to ask him if he needed help looking for someone. Obviously changelings who were bad at hiding who they really were. Draw ignored them, but that didn't stop them from following him.

 

Draw rounded the next corner, starting to get a bit nervous. He had just gone through a feeding yesterday, he didn't need another one (with a likely beating to boot) so soon. "Horseapples." Draw said flatly. A dead end. "Not too lucky are you?" A changeling stated while reverting back to his original form. Draw Toonz had to agree with him there.


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The changeling charged at draw, hissing, but he dodged it and it smashed into the wall.

It looked at him in hatred.

"Get back here, pony scum! You know the punishment for avoiding feeding!"

It shouted as it chased him, all while random ponies on the street started to revert back to changelings and join the chase.

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Pencil Doodle acknowledged The Doctors request, but chose to ignore it. He walked away from Cloud Dreamer without so much as a heads up that he won't be showing him around.

 

Pencil walked up to the control panel and stood next to The Doctor, and began a discussion with him:

"Those Changelings are powerful, we're going to need to plan our mission through carefully... that implies you taking this seriously"


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The Doctor raised an eyebrow.

"When do I joke about this kind of stuff."

Doodle gave him an unamused look.

"Okay, okay, but really, I've had ten years to plan this, don't worry."

He got up, and walked down the stairs under the console's glass floor.

"Besides,"

He shouted at Doodle,

"I've got agents on the inside."

He started tampering with the mechanisms under the console.

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"HORSEAPPLES-HORSEAPPLES-HORSEAPPLES~!!!"

Frantic cursing flew from Draw Toonz's mouth as he ran from six- no, seven changelings. Well eight now. "C'mon Draw, THINK!" Draw was good at galloping, but his stamina was lacking. He knew if he didn't do something, they'd catch up to him, even with adrenaline on his side. As the changelings began to draw near, and idea formed in his head.

 

Levitating the mechanical pencil and large paper pad out of his saddle bags, Draw began to, well, draw. Finishing his quick sketching, a small burst of light then shone out of Draw's horn. Suddenly, five banana peels flew off the paper pad and onto the street. A few of the changelings slipped on them, and they all ended up in a pile. "That's weird, I thought I drew six," Draw said as he saw a paper-white bird land on a sign out of the corner of his eye. "Dadgum glitches. Oh well." Draw released the spell after he rounded the corner into another alley, causing all of the living-sketches to revert back to paper.


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Ivy over to the two other ponies and smiled. "Hey!" She said happily. Being back with the doctor had restored her old emotions. She smiled and looked over at the doctor "So... what do we nave planned?"

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Prince finally awoke from his dull drums. "Back in the old TARDIS..... Dreams really do come true I suppose" prince walked around TARDIS waiting for an assignment. He didn't like not doing anything but not doing anything now was the worst thing he could do!


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The Doctor smiled and walked over to the doors.

"Wait for it..."

He suddenly burst them open letting in a green unicorn who stumbled inside.

"Welcome, Draw. I am the Doctor, and you are now part of the Revolution."

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Pencil pulled out a pen and a diary from that pocket he'd sewn onto his cloak. He began writing:

 

"Sequel to previous entry"

 

"My wish had true, The Doctor has returned. I am currently on board the Tardis, but it seems that The Doctor has been busy. There is another pony onboard, and i'm fairly certain that there are more. Is this part of a plan he has? One can only hope... i hate being around others"

 

"... to be perfectly honest, i didn't think i'd make it this far. My last entry was basically my suicide note. But i'm here, and i can fight"

 

"Pencil out, and my mercy be given on us"

 

After he wrote the last word, Pencil sharply put the pen and diary away back into his pocket, hoping no one would notice. Then just acted like nothing had happened.


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The Doctor saw Doodle writing something, but decided to ignore it for now.

"Alrighty, then."

He said, and stepped out of the TARDIS.

"Hellooooo changelings!"

The group of changelings who had been pursuing Draw Toonz had called for backup once they saw the blue box and there were now literally hundreds surrounding the TARDIS.

The Doctor smiled.

"I'm sure you recognizability the blue box, and yes I am the Doctor."

He stepped to confront one of the commanders.

"Bur I'm not just the leader of the revolution. Oh, no."

He walked back in the middle, ignoring the glowing horns and guns pointed at him.

"I am also the Doctor, the villain in your every fairy tale, the pony who killed your king, the demon who could be anywhere and nowhere!"

He grinned. They were backing off.

"In your language, 'Doctor' means enemy, nightmare, your worst fear. And THE Doctor, the one who gave that word it's definition, is here to say ONE thing and one thing only:"

He walked back to the TARDIS, whispering one word before slamming the door shut.

"The revolution has started."

When the changelings shook themselves from the shock, the machine had already gone.

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Cloud Drifter staggered out of TARDIS. He was woozy, both from the trip and from tiredness. He took three steps out... and collapsed

 

Cloud Dreamer stood up and wandered to the Doctor. His eyes had turned pure white. He whispered, so that only he could hear:

 

Caught here in a fiery blaze, won't lose my will to stay.

 

I tried to drive all through the night,

the heat stroke ridden weather, the barren empty sights.

No oasis here to see, the sand is singing deathless words to me.

 

Can't you help me as I'm startin' to burn.

Too many doses and I'm starting to get an attraction.

My confidence is leaving me on my own.

No one can save me and you know I don't want the attention.

 

As I adjust to my new sights the rarely tired lights will take me to new heights.

My hand is on the trigger I'm ready to ignite.

Tomorrow might not make it but everything's all right.

Mental fiction, follow me; show me what it's like to be set free.

 

Can't you help me as I'm startin' to burn (all alone).

Too many doses and I'm starting to get an attraction.

My confidence is leaving me on my own (all alone).

No one can save me and you know I don't want the attention.

 

So sorry you're not here I've been sane too long my vision's so unclear.

Now take a trip with me but don't be surprised when things aren't what they seem.

 

Then he collapsed, and was still.

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Draw was still on the floor of the TARDIS when the Doctor had finished giving his speech, partly because he was still trying to piece together what had just happened and partly because of how great the speech was. He picked himself up as the Doctor shut the door to the TARDIS, seeing several other ponies in front of him. "Uh... hi?" he said and smiled sheepishly. He always hated being late to the party.


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Pencil stared at Draw with his usual emotionless expression; clearly showing little care for this newcomer. He held out his hoof, offering the pony one of his rare hoof-shakes. And introduced himself:

 

"Hello, i am Pencil Doodle. Welcome to our little uprising"

 

Pencil then began to get closer to the colt. Not in an awkward manner, but in one that suggested that he wanted to speak with him.

 

"So, how do you know the Doctor?"


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Draw felt slightly off-put by both Pencil's serious greeting and the question itself. After putting in a moment of thought, Draw replied, "To be honest, I don't know him very well. I saw him around Ponyville before the attack. All I remember is strange things would happen around him, including the disappearing and reappearing phone booth he would regularly enter and exit. I'm assuming that we're in the phone booth now, but it's HUGE in here!" Draw paused, really taking in the size of the 'phone booth'. That's when a question popped into his head. "Does everypony here know the Doctor in some way?"

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Pencil replied

 

"I'm not sure. I know him from... events... of my past, but i'm not sure about everpony else. I think that Cloud Chaser person over there knows him, but you'll have to ask them yourself"

 

Pencil remembered he still had his hoof out. He awkwardly drew it away and began to walk off into the rest of the scattered group


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Ivy was hovering just above the floor. She put her hoof to her mouth as she thought. She flew toward Prince giving him a hug. She wasn’t going to let him go lightly, she blushed and smiled. “Oh… Prince I missed you so much” she trailed off.

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Draw was still standing where he got up, lost in thought. He started mumbling to himself.

"Stupid Draw, STUPID! You forgot to shake hooves and now you look like a jerk. I should go apologize."

Draw looked up to see Pencil had already left.

"I'll have to remember to apologize later. Celestia, you are horrible with introductions Draw."

He then remembered what Pencil said, but when he looked over at Cloud he saw that he was speaking with the Doctor outside the TARDIS.

"Well I'm sure we'll all get to know each other in time..." Draw contemplated.

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Prince hugged Ivy back "You have no idea how much I missed you..." He thought to himself "Looks like I have more to protect than just Equestria" he knew it would be just like old times, and that's how he wanted it.


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Ivy flapped her wings a few times, she put her hoof up to her mouth again. She pointed over to a brown unicorn "Well... Thats Penical i havn't spoken to him yet" she said as her eyes scaned the tardis. She the pointed to a green unicorn "Thats Draw, i don't know much about them" she paused and flapped her wings again. "I was to happy to see you again i forgot all about meeting the other ponies"

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Draw perked his ears when he heard his name. Locating the source, the quirky unicorn walked over to greet them. "It's time I made a better first impression of myself." He thought as he reached them.

"Hey I heard my name." Draw said with a smile. "I guess you guys know that I'm Draw Toonz. As the name implies, I like to draw cartoons. I know you're the Doctor."

Draw looked at the Doctor.

"It's a pleasure to finally meet you."

He turned back to the other two ponies.

"But I haven't seen you guys before. I assume your friends of the Doctor's?"


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Prince stopped swinging his tail for a moment. He stood up straight and puffed out his chest. "My name is Prince Lightning Flicker of the Royal Family. And yes, the doctor and us go back, we have helped each other quite alot and it appears our adventures are still continuing" Prince began spinning his tail at a rapid pace until he lifted up off the ground and started hovering like a helicopter with his tail like the rotor. "Did it!" he cheered.


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