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Suddenly Draw Toonz burst into the briefing room. "Sorry I'm late guys! Lost track of time. I promise to keep an eye on a clock next time. What's going on, what I miss?" Draw questioned.


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"Easy! I fall into one of my rages and then while I'm off putting a dent in the changeling's army, Prince sneaks in with the Doctor and loots some blueprints, plans, or even hints of other targets. Then I haul my body over into TARDIS- after I shake the changelings- and wait, while the rest of you bust up the place, and then we get out."

 

(I'm going now, I won't be able to post again tonight.)

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"It's more of a Search and Destroy mission, we have to disrupt their communications before they can react. It'll give us more time to take different objectives aswell." Prince expression was that of a soldier's giving out orders.


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"Oh okay, sounds good. Anything specific you need me to do, or should I just support others?" Draw asked, slightly nervous that he didn't have to handle anything too big on his own. He was still getting used to the fact that he was part of a revolution going against the Changeling Empire.


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"Keep in mind all these objectives will be heavily guarded"

No one noticed that Pencil was in the room, it was as if he had just sneaked in through the shadows

"We're going to need an offensive team in case we need to clear out large groups of foes, or at least some shape changers or spies who would be able to get past the guards un-noticed"

"Any one willing to volunteer?"


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The Doctor smiled at Pencil.

"Right you are, my friend. That's why you, Cloud Dreamer and Draw Toonz are going to create a distraction."

He pointed at another blueprint.

"The Manehattan train station has two levels: The Changelings level and the deportation level. The latter is where ponies are sent to be taken to Cloudsdale in the Experimantation facility."

He pointed at what seemed a heavily armed tank.

"This is the main carriage. You are going to destroy it while it recharges. It'll be heavily guarded, so try not to attract attention untill you're there. Finally,"

He sighed triumphantly and took out a map of what seemed a castle.

"Me and Prince are going to go to High Court Hall, wich has been re-engineered to become a changeling prison."

Even Agoun seemed confused.

"A prison for who?"

Doc smiled, the smile he put on only when he was about to say something flabberghasting.

"A prison for their greatest food source. A prison for Princess Mi Amore Cadenza and her groom. A prison for love itself."

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"YES!!!" Cloud Dreamer yelled. "It's time to dish out some deathblows to Chrysalis! However, the prison will most likely be heavily guarded. Having the same element as the changlings- darkness- I may be able to undo them..." he smirked. "So, how about you three blast into the place while Pencil, Toonz, and I bust heads, then we all gather around the prison- Ivy and the Doctor being Time Lords, so they may be able to help me channel energy into the "lock" of dark energy. If we can, we will unlock it- then we take everyone to TARDIS, the Doctor taunts them all, and then we leave. Sounds good?"

 

(If I'm trying to become the main character, I'll stop. :blush: )

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Pencil looked like he was trying to smile, but to no avail

"Good idea Cloud, basic, but good"

He jumped off of his seat and started to trot around the room, gently stroking everyponies chin as he went along.

"However, we'll need to expand on it greatly. The changelings have some of the best warriors on the face of this world, and it's not like they're going to give us their major food supply, is it?"

He then approached Cloud, and looked him in the eye in an almost threatening manor.

"we'll have to train day and night for a raid like this, and probably even have to prepare for multiple casualties"


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Ivy blushed and smiled "I maybe part time lord but i have no idea how to use them" she sighed. She looked at all the other ponies in the room "I'll always do my best but i'm still new to this!" She looked at penical as he stroked her chin. She looked at him and sighed "But night and day sounds so much work!" she sighed. She then looked shocked and smiled "But i'll do what ever it takes!"

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Pencil look back over to Ivy and put on his 'murderers smile'

"that'a girl"

He then turned his head sharply to face everyone else in the group

"Anyone else in?"


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The Doctor shook his head.

"No, stick with the station. As Pencil pointed out, they're too skilled for you to take on at the prison. Me and Prince are going in with stealth."

He jumped up, and put away the blueprints.

"Every pony stick with the plan. It's our best chance. Now, go to sleep."

He said nothing else, and just exited the room to go tamper with the TARDIS some more.

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((Sorry I haven't been posting today, my Internet has been out.))

 

 

Draw decided to go with the Doctor's plan. He teleported back to his room. "So Cadenza and Shining are still alive?!" He spoke to himself while picking up his pencil again, "I can't believe it, after all these years! I guess it makes sense though. From what I heard from Twilight at the library, their love was food fit for a queen." Of course, the Queen herself did feed off that love before at the wedding.

 

"Okay so I think I know a little bit about who my... comrades (not sure if I should call them friends yet) are." Draw continued his monologue to himself. "The Doctor... okay I don't really know that much about him, but he definitely knows what he's talking about here so I'll follow his orders.

 

"Pencil. He's mysterious and seems to take everything seriously. I don't know what powers that unicorn has, but he's got a pencil for a C.M., so he might have a special talent like me."

 

Draw looked at his own Cutie Mark, smiling at the assortment of different pencils.

 

"Ivy's nice. And apparently part Time Lord, whatever that means. Oh and she controls fall, so I assume she can... make the leaves change color?... Maybe make it slightly chilly? I'll have to find out later.

 

"Prince... an alicorn who seems to like to cut-up. I wonder if I can do that with my tail... I'll try later maybe.

 

"There's that one colt named Cloud... Horseapples! I don't think I even said hello to the guy! I wonder what he meant by 'rages'.

 

"And lastly there's the red mare and Au... Aaaa... dadgum that's hard to pronounce. The changeling. The mare seems energetic, to say the least, and the changeling... well the Doctor's alright with him so I guess I can trust him."

 

Finally summing up his out-loud thoughts, Draw proceeded to doodle at the table he was sitting at. Before going to bed, he had decided it would be best to prepare for the upcoming battle by making a couple of things that would be useful during the battle. The last thing anypony needed was for something to happen while they were waiting on him to finish a sketch. Just then something else popped into his head.

 

"Why the hay did Pencil touch my chin???" Draw said bringing a fore-hoof to his chin-spike.

 

 

((HOLY CRAP that was long, maybe I should go easy on the 'enter' key.))

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Pencil was standing in the elevator. He was tired and wanted to sleep; but going to his room was not the biggest thing on his mind. It appeared to you could create rooms and places from your imagination and memory, it must be linked to the universal time vortex or something? It seemed complicated...

 

Pencil thought it through, he knew where he wanted to go...

"Take me to Twilight Sparkles house"

And in a whiz, the machine was traveling again at what seemed to be light speed; Pencil could see the brown in his coat fade away as it appeared to be traveling slower than the rest of him.

 

But suddenly, he came to a stop, and all the colours caught up with him again. When he opened the door, what stood before him made his heart weaken:

An exact replica of Twilight's library.

 

He began to snoop around. He had only ever been in here once and never even got to look around properly. Or to even tell Twilight how he felt about her when he had the chance. For all he knew she could be dead by now, and this mere image of what used to be her home would be all he had to remember her by.

The sight of each book almost brought a tear to Pencils eye, and the feel of the wooden floorboards under his hoofs made his knees shake in sorrow. But the next sight would be the lowest point where he could sink:

Twilight's photograph.

 

It was suspended against the wall in a bronze frame. It was taken presumably a few weeks before the invasion, she was smiling, smiling as if everything would be Ok forever.

Pencil reached out his hoof to stroke her beautiful mane, only to be stopped by the glass screen.

 

Instead he just removed to photo from the wall, and cuddled with it on the sofa. He was curled into a ball, holding the photograph as if it were a part of his body. At that he tried to go to sleep, still with wet cheeks from where tears had managed to escape


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Peeps had gotten completely wrapped up in her experimentation and what had seemed like a few minutes had turned into hours. Peeps poked her head into the open door of the TARDIS elevator "Can you take me to the others? I have a feeling I'm supposed to be planning, but I'm not and that could prove... problematic... to say the least." The TARDIS elevator doors swished closed and opened again in the main console room. Peeps stepped out and looked around for any help. She called out to no one in particular, "hello? anyone? what'd I miss?"


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Cloud Dreamer felt.. something. He was almost packed full of the dark energy he needed for the mission, so he was 99% sure of it...

He entered TARDIS and asked it to take him to... a place that his energy showed TARDIS. He walked out... into the... library? Yes, Twilight's old library. And... he saw Pencil, sobbing and holding a photo of Twilight... he smiled, careful not to wake him. That's good song material...

He paced around, and left a note for Pencil when he awoke, and left. He needed to keep stashing energy for tomorrow's mission. It would be meteoric.

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Pencil Doodle slowly began to wake up; it had been several hours since he fell asleep and all his negative emotions didn't help him rest.

He was still cradling Twilight's photograph in his arms, like how a child cradles a soft toy. As his eyes began to open, he revealed them to be heavily bloodshot from crying.

Rarely had Pencil been in such a pathetic state.

 

After moving his head around for a few moments trying to click his neck, Pencil Noticed a little folded piece of paper. It was never there before, and the library is way too organized for stuff to appear out of nowhere like that.

Despite the fact that Pencil was in no mood to talk, he opened up the note and read it. It was a note from Cloud Dreamer:

 

"Dear Pencil,

I know how hard it is for you to be without your loved one. Twilight was like a second mom to me, there for me before this happened. If I- or anyone else- finds out where she is, I will personally volunteer to go on that venture with you.

I hope you will understand. I feel as if I haven't been truly loved since I have been subjected to Chrysalis's experiments, the reason I am with the dark power you see me with now...

Signed,

Cloud Dreamer.

 

Pencil felt... strange. He had never really socialized with Cloud before, he felt that he wouldn't care. But this message had so much depth for Pencil, it showed that someone shared his pain and cares for him. Plus someone who said that they'd help him save Twilight if it isn't too late.

 

Pencil dried his tears, and for once, put on a natural smile. Things were finally looking up for Pencil.

He got back into the elevator, not caring were he'd end up next. It was a brand new day for him

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"May Ivy and the Royal family prosper and shine once more." prince sworn as he entered the elevator. "May the Love begin." he said with a final word as the doors closed and he headed to the Doctor's room.


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Ivy blushed at Prince is words. She smiled and bowed slight, "good night everpony" she jumped in to the elevator. She walked into her room she jumped into her bed and looked at the ceiling. She smiled as the picture of her family was painted there. She got out of her bed and added Prince and the doctor to it. She laughed "My family is always growing"

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I hate tuning my guitar. I HATE it, though Cloud. It always produces a racket, and I have to do it. Harumph.

He looked out the window. Welp, it's time to start waking people up. He entered TARDIS and went to the Doctor's room. He hoped that he didn't look like an idiot. Oh well.

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