New Story Advise

[Deviousnights 48]

As an old washed up writer, I am a tad curious if my works have even been seeing improvement. i wrote yet another story on my Fimfiction: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/192775/DeviousNights. That being said, I would love if someone or some people would give it a read and see if it has improved in any way, and if not how i can improve. And also, how would I get the word out? Without shoving it down others throats as i feel i am now

[Shadow Beam 1,179]

Moved into AK Yearling's Writing Resources as it's more appropriate for the request. ^^

Have a good one!