Twilight Sparkle Cranks It

[VladmireV.S.(Crank) 1,096]

ok every pony!this is my first fanfic!i encourage critism(constructive) and brohoofs are always welcome

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Hey Twilight!” Vinyl Scratch said as she walked into the purple pony’s library….or home. Vinyl still didn’t get the whole librarian thing down yet. She was one of ponyvilles best DJ after all, and they aren’t known for reading books. “Oh Vinyl, I didn’t hear you come in.” the purple pony said as she levitated a book into it rightful place on the shelf. “What are you doing here?” Twilight said. “Oh, I wanted to invite you and your friends to this new club in town. You guys seem very stressed lately.” She was right. Spike had sneezed outside the house, setting it ablaze. Twilight and her friends had to rebuild it by themselves due to the construction workers still cleaning up Discord’s last mess. “Um, thanks for the offer, but I think I’ll pass. You know clubs aren’t really my scene anyways” Twilight said. “I know but you and your friends have been really stressed, you especially you due to having to re-order the books and re-shelve all of them by yourself.” Vinyl said. Vinyl was right, after all, they all still had sawdust and paint in there hair from the house. “Oh…okay” Twilight said. “Yay!” Vinyl said as her voice cracked due to excitement. “I’ll inform my friends and we will all meet up here at 6:00, okay?” Twilight said as Vinyl walked towards the door. “Sounds good to me!”

 

[Later that night] “Okay, everypony ready?” Twilight said. As she was listening to all the confirmations, Vinyl walked in. “Who’s ready to party?” she said. “Let’s do this!” Rainbow Dash said in an enthusiastic voice as she walked over to Vinyl to give her a brohoof. “Let’s go!” Pinkie pie said as the all walked out the door.

 

As they followed Vinyl down the street, Twilight noticed that she was leading them to the abandoned shack on the outskirts of Ponyville. When they arrived, two big burly ponies in a black shirt and jeans said “ticket?” Vinyl automatically said to one of them “its alright, I’m a friend of the owner here and these six ladies are here with me”. “I’m going to have to go and get the owner to clarify that m’am, be right back.” As the burly pony returned, a tall slender pony walked up to Vinyl and gave her a big hug. “Ah, Vinyl how’s it going?” Vinyl responded “everypony, this is Tom, the club owner here.” As Tom lets us past the guards Twilight looks up to see a big purple neon sign that says ‘Crank It’. When they arrived in the club, they all heard a jumble of voices and music all mixed together with the noise of hooves pounding on the multi-colored neon floor. Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie automatically ran into the sea of people and started dancing like crazy swinging hooves every which way while Rarity and Applejack went up to the club bar and asked for two apple ciders. Fluttershy went up to a table and set her head down trying not to let her shyness and fear get the best of her. That left Twilight, all by herself at the entrance of the club while Tom and Vinyl went to Tom’s office to catch up.

 

Twilight walked up to an empty seat at the bar, away from Applejack and Rarity, and asked the bar owner for a water.” A what?” the bartender asked in a playful tone. “Honey you know we serve alcohol here right?” Twilight looked at her and said “I don’t drink alcohol.” The bartender just shrugged and gave Twilight a glass of ice water in a flank shaped glass. As Twilight drank her water, a purple pony with headphones around his neck walked up to the seat next to her. This pony had a black and purple mane with a record as his cutie mark. As he sat down he asked the bartender in a low toned voice “one forty-ounce of Bacardi strawberry please.” He looked over and saw Twilight reading the bars menu like it was an intriguing fantasy book. He looked at her and said “why are you reading in a club? You’re supposed to be out there dancing and having fun like everypony else.” He said. “I’m not the club-type if you know what I mean. I’m more of a quiet pony” she said looking at the purple pony with a strait face, looking into his magenta eyes.” Well everypony needs a break every once in a while. My name is Crank Shift. And what might yours be m’lady?” Crank said. “My name is Twilight Sparkle.” She said in a dry, hollow voice. “Well, why don’t’ you come with me? I have a really special spot in the club where you can see everything.” he said, holding out his hoof. ”Oh….I guess it can’t do much harm.” Twilight said as she took his hoof in hers as he pulled her through the mess of people on the dance floor.

 

As they reached the end of the crowd she notices that they go into a door that says ‘employees only’. As the reach the end of the hallway they were walking through, they walk up to a big metal door with spray paint all over the front of the door. As Crank opens the door and they walked through she notices they are in a glass dome about ten feet above the whole party. There was a turntable set in brand new condition sitting in the front of the dome. As Crank plugged his earphones into the turntables, Twilight asked “Isn’t this for the DJ only?” Crank Shift replied “Yea. Why do you think I’m plugging in my equipment to the tables? I’m the DJ here at this club. Why do you think it’s called ‘Crank It’?” Twilight suddenly remembered the sign above the club entrance and its title. All of a sudden she heard a loud pitch noise, which turned out to be feedback from the mic in Crank Shift’s hand. ”Who’s ready to get down and go wild!?” Crank Shift yelled into the mic as a reply of a sea of yells and whistles eco through the crowd. “This next song is dedicated to the lovely purple pony in the DJ booth next to me!” Crank says as Twilights face turned a bright red noticing he was talking about her. The song he played was a dirty dubstep mixed in with a DnB song that sounded like it was about to make Twilights ears explode. “Oh, sorry! Forgot to give you your headphones!” Crank says as he hands the purple pony black headphones with a mic attached to it so she can speak to him while he is playing the tracks. Midway through, Twilight heard out of her headphones “do you like this song so far?” she looked over and noticed that Crank had said it. “I guess so’ she said, tapping her hoof to the beat.

 

As the song ended a big round of applause echoed through the club as her and Crank stepped out of the booth as soon as another DJ comes in to take over. As he took her back to the bar he started talking to her and they started to realize that they had a lot in common. Crank finally asked her a question that had been killing him all night. “Um, Twilight? Do you maybe, I don’t know, wanna go out for a date at sugarcube corner tomorrow?” Twilight blushed at the comment and almost immediately spat out a “Yes!” as Crank heard that word his heart flipped in joy so fast, he thought it was going to fly out of his chest. “Okay, we can meet there around 3:00 or so?” he asked her in a excited tone. “Actually can we meet up at my house first? I have to run a few task before our date.” She asked. “That’s fine with me.” Crank said in a now more calmed tone. “Great! We can meet there at 2:30 and be done at 3:00 for our date. Okay?”. Twilight said in a enthusiastic tone. “Okay!” Crank said, getting up. “I really wish I could stay, but I have to get back to the booth so my friend can have his break. See ya tomorrow?” he said, in a questionable tone. “Most definitely!” Twilight said getting up, realizing how late it was. As she got all her friends and started to head home, a million thoughts raced in her head about the purple DJ pony. As she got to her house and laid in her bed she couldn’t help but think about the next day and how wonderful it’s going to be.

 

[Morning]. As Crank Shift walked down the road, he walked up to a mirror on a stand and checked himself over. He was wearing a black collared shirt with a pair of silver and black aviators on and a necklace that said ‘DJ Crank’ on it. As he walked up to Twilights home he noticed that he was twenty minutes early. “She probably won’t mind. We ma be able to get done early and go on our date.” He thought as he knocked on the door. No answer. As he peeked his head in the house it looked like it was empty. He thought she went to get something in a stall and went ahead and went in to sit on a chair to wait for her. As he sat down he heard a noise coming from what looked like the bathroom. Fearfully, he opened the door to see Twilight in the bathtub. Water cascaded of her beautiful purple mane as it dripped down onto her beautifully curved body falling all the way down to her hoofs and into the water. Crank Shift blushed at the sight and covered his eyes as Twilight looked over and automatically went into shock. “I’m so sorry! I thought you were gone to the market and I heard a noise, so I went to check it out, and it turns out you were taking a bath!” he said in rushed tone. “Sorry Twilight, I promise I wasn’t trying to peek on you or anything. I’ll…. I’ll just go and wait in the living room.” He said as he closed the door and rushed into the living room to realize what just happened. As Twilight finished her shower and came out, she saw Crank sitting in the corner rubbing his eyebrows with a stressed look on his face. As she walked up to confront him, he looked up and said in a sad tone “I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to spy on you or anythi-“Twilight embraced him in a passionate kiss, there lips locking in a loving embrace, Twilights tongue pursed his lips as he was happy to oblige and push his tongue into her mouth as they played with each others tongues for many minutes. Finally, there lungs got the best of them as each pony gasped for air. As Twilights breath returned to normal she said “Its okay. I know you didn’t mean to walk in on me. And I’m flattered that you would be this considerate and apologize for an accident. Now, shall we get on with our date?” she said as she held out her hoof to help him up. [Later that night]. “Man, Pinkie knows hot to cook a good cake, huh Twilight?” Crank said as he helped Twilight into her home. “Yea, it is her job after all.” She said in a playful tone. “You wanna be smart?” Crank said in a playfully tone as he tackled her to the ground and pinned her hoofs and feet to the ground, giving her a deeply passionate kiss. As he picked his head up he says “I love you.” Twilight gives him the most beautiful look as he looks into her beautiful eyes as she say “I love you too.”

Edited June 7, 2012 by Crank Shift

[TomokoKuroki 1,707]

I am sorry, I can't read walls of text. It is just a personal pet peeve of mine, and a few others may feel the same.

 

​I would recommend just editing it so paragraphs are in use to make it easier to read for everyone. That is just me though.

[FortyShadows 217]

Perhaps post this on FimFiction? I have a hard time reading a huge block and would have a better time reading it split into paragraphs.

 

Edit: Ooh, more shipping?

Edited June 6, 2012 by XraYZPony

[King Otrepony 27]

I like it a lot, especially for a first one, but could you make an epilouge?

[VladmireV.S.(Crank) 1,096]

I am sorry, I can't read walls of text. It is just a personal pet peeve of mine, and a few others may feel the same. ​I would recommend just editing it so paragraphs are in use to make it easier to read for everyone. That is just me though.

on it!

Perhaps post this on FimFiction? I have a hard time reading a huge block and would have a better time reading it split into paragraphs. Edit: Ooh, more shipping?

^^

I like it a lot, especially for a first one, but could you make an epilouge?

i'm already on it sir!

 

*edit* okay i tried spacing it out a little Hayze. better?

[King Otrepony 27]

Cool. Thank-you. Post it as soon as possible