NomadSpellbrush 1,291 July 6, 2021 Share July 6, 2021 It has been almost 3 years since I last wrote a chapter for my fanfiction, I'm thinking about getting back into it. The issue is dialogue for the officer that is handling Twilight as she goes through booking. I want him to be of an arsehole that constantly insults and talks down to Twilight, but everything I could come up with has come off as weak or cheesy. If anyone has any sort of advice, that would be great. Heres what I'm working on: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/412669/imprisonment-of-a-sparkle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Pink One 13,506 July 7, 2021 Share July 7, 2021 Makem a bit bored at talking to twilight and make witty lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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