My Pony contest entry (Require critique please)

[~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066]

Alright, This is my contest entry I would like some serious critiquing of my art, seeing as I worked extra hard on this particular piece.

 

http://eljordo911.de...unset-307090463

 

and If you feel like helping me out in the competition, just gimme votes Only if I really deserve it

 

http://prizes.org/Create-a-limited-edition-8-x-10-work-of-art-for-the-bronycon-documentary-1?tab=entries&sort=stars&size=15&filter=all&view=grid&page=1

Edited June 8, 2012 by Eljordo

[Midnightive 458]

sorry as i sit in awe. i wish you all the best of luck and hope its gets noticed because it's awesome~

[Tenshinohana 264]

Oh my, this certainly is impressive! I love the colors here!

 

Tho the only things bothering me are the heads. The other one (blue) seems to be a bit oval and the red one's a little "thick".. But it's not much! ^^ I hope you do get votes and that you get noticed~

[Bugz 159]

It's great.

 

Only thing bothering me is the eyes with both guys, something seems to be little off with those.

 

But overall it's very good.

[Pix3M 607]

The good?

 

Good choice of colors for the background

And the blurry quality of the background also creates a dream-like feeling

 

Areas to work on?

 

Anatomy. Incredibly hard to describe how it exactly makes me feel the anatomy isn't right, but I could point out the blue pegasus' back right leg, both of their faces

Color choice for your OC's. Vivid blue and red doesn't quite go with the colors for the background, does it, and it makes them feel out of place.

Aimless shading. The background makes me think that there is a CLEAR light source coming from the sun. Looking at the OC's however, there's apparently a light source coming from the opposite direction, which makes it comfusing.

[eighth_note 4]

I love it I like how the ponies are so bright against the background!

[~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066]

The good?

 

Good choice of colors for the background

And the blurry quality of the background also creates a dream-like feeling

 

Areas to work on?

 

Anatomy. Incredibly hard to describe how it exactly makes me feel the anatomy isn't right, but I could point out the blue pegasus' back right leg, both of their faces

Color choice for your OC's. Vivid blue and red doesn't quite go with the colors for the background, does it, and it makes them feel out of place.

Aimless shading. The background makes me think that there is a CLEAR light source coming from the sun. Looking at the OC's however, there's apparently a light source coming from the opposite direction, which makes it comfusing.

 

Thank you for the feedback I have to admit, the more I really look at it, the more I can see the flaws in the anatomy ;/ shame

[Pix3M 607]

Thank you for the feedback I have to admit, the more I really look at it, the more I can see the flaws in the anatomy ;/ shame

 

I can say something similar about the very avatar you're using right now, though it's more about color than anatomy. Heheh...

[~Chaos~ 3,967]

Amazing piece of work, i love the style very nicely done!

[~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066]

Amazing piece of work, i love the style very nicely done!

 

Why thank you, I appreciate the feedback