Opinions on my OC

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

Hi guys! I would like to know what you think of my OC Sylvius! He's a red and black OC so i'm sorry and he's a cyborg. He's kind of bad to me but I want to know what you think! also it's 1:00 on my end but I am not sleepy yet. anywho, thanks everybody!
 

[Rikifive 24,128]

Hi @Stellar Heights, Feedback forum is for submitting suggestions and opinions related to the forums, for original characters, there's a dedicated forum focusing on letting users seek help with their creation, so I have moved your thread there. 

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

oops, sorry!  I didn't know!

[Nitobit 1,773]

Can you say something more about him? Why is he a cyborg, what's his backstory, who's the pony on the right?

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

@Nitobit He's a cyborg because of Fritz Tarkin, who once was a villain but was reformed later, his past name was Ivan Petals, he was the brother of Ivy Petals. Fritz killed him in hopes of trying to lure Ivy in so the rest of my OCs would go looking for her and fall into her trap, of course Sylvius knew what she did, and he got away and formed his own rogue crew of Azure Shadows, (The pony with blue hair on the right) and Sparky Rivalry (a unicorn rogue).  His attitude is very snappy and angry and he often can be seen yelling at Sparky, (who is a little dimwitted.) Hope you like him! 

Also he was originally a joke OC which is why he's red and black, but I felt bad for him and kept him! 

[Nightmare Saturn 815]

pony update: I drew Sylvius, Azure Shadows and Sparky Rivalry!