A gen 1 fanfiction I wrote!

[Octavian 5,421]

Hey, G1 ponies, I have been writing a G1 fic, whose first stage is just about complete. I'm looking for comments and critique before I post it to FimFic. The first stage is all about the herd going camping. The full cast is there, along with cameos - it's all pretty ambitious  For people less familiar with G1 it can serve as an intro to these ponies (and humans) too, as it's trying to explain the different pony types and set out the characters and things, before the next stage in which there is a lil more action.

The big story it's part of is called A Tale of Two Fizzies, while Part 1, which is this is the first part of, is called "The Fire".