critique wanted Snow's scribbles for the fridge door.

[StaryStory 4,055]

 

9 hours ago, Snow said:

I stalled for a long darn time BUT! I did actually draw today. I said last night that I should look into how to draw clouds and found a really quick tutorial which is always helpful spur of the moment.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pi8463ia0wI&ab_channel=TheGeekArtist
Gave it a watch and tried my hand and added a little dash of yellow and pink to make it pony. 

I don't think its terrible for a first attempt  I better practice more though!

Indeed good attempt, honestly I've been drawing clouds on "auto mode" ultimately, I could try making something more "focused" to see how it looks like, though I won't use that tutorial because I don't like using tutorials 

By the way, what's that thing? Spike? A random dragon or something else flying? Your signature?  ~☆

Edit: wait, it's Fluttershy? 

Edited March 31 by RafaStaryStory

[Snow 8,312]

I’m still alive!

Just doing a sorry job of getting the ball rolling, these turned out ok 

[ThePinkestofPones 5,633]

YAY! And I see my doodle is now your pfp, so I assume your computer is all better now! 

[Snow 8,312]

On 2025-04-01 at 10:23 AM, RafaStaryStory said:

Edit: wait, it's Fluttershy? 

Oh yes, it is suppose to be! I’ll surly get better with time  

 

@Dah Onion Eater  I love my new profile pic, thanks!

No computer At least until the 29th but I found a way to reduce the image size so MLPF would accept it!

[Snow 8,312]

Let it be known I actually drew something over the weekend 

Rara!

[Snow 8,312]

And now that I bought some Colour pencils today I got excited and took em for a spin 

I’ve been mucking around well inside my comfort zone lately but hopefully soon I’ll start with some meaningful practice that will very much benefit from critique.

[Snow 8,312]

I got a late start at work today and tried to draw RD before leaving the house 

I’ve been given a tip to try and colour using a circular motion to combat the sketchiness. Will have to see how that goes tonight.

[Street Light 345]

1 minute ago, Snow said:

I got a late start at work today and tried to draw RD before leaving the house 

I’ve been given a tip to try and colour using a circular motion to combat the sketchiness. Will have to see how that goes tonight.

i LOVE her expression!!!! she looks determined and also a bit angwy! some neigh-sayer is probably annoying her, and she's got half a mind to teach them a lesson >:3c

[ThePinkestofPones 5,633]

1 minute ago, Snow said:

I got a late start at work today and tried to draw RD before leaving the house 

I’ve been given a tip to try and colour using a circular motion to combat the sketchiness. Will have to see how that goes tonight.

It's awesome! A few tips on the hair though, I'd suggest doing it shorter, like this pic:

Unless you were going for a Fluttershy pose, which, maybe because of the hair over the eye.

[Snow 8,312]

@Dah Onion Eater  right you are!

Her hair is usually a bit shorter indeed but this time around I wanted to try something a bit more stylized  Rainbow Dash always dressed in style after all 

 

15 minutes ago, Street Light said:

i LOVE her expression!!!!

Omgoodness thanks so much!! It took forever to figure out the lashes 

[ThePinkestofPones 5,633]

1 minute ago, Snow said:

@Dah Onion Eater  right you are!

Her hair is usually a bit shorter indeed but this time around I wanted to try something a bit more stylized  Rainbow Dash always dressed in style after all 

 

Omgoodness thanks so much!! It took forever to figure out the lashes 

It's a cute manestyle, reminds of me of Rainbow Splash, that one alicorn OC that was famous for having rainbow hair. 

Nice G3 reference, have a donut

[Snow 8,312]

That circular motion technique really did work quite well but boy did it take a while.

Plus an outline to really bring it all together, I’m a lot happier with this drawing now.  

[Street Light 345]

On 2025-05-26 at 5:04 PM, Snow said:

That circular motion technique really did work quite well but boy did it take a while.

Plus an outline to really bring it all together, I’m a lot happier with this drawing now.  

omg just now seeing this!!!! :3 you really cleaned it up ^~^ im glad you kept her mane and expression, it added a lot of personality to her, and honestly looking at it now you also did a nice job on that wing perspective!!! wings seem to be pretty hard to get right sometimes but I really like how it folds out and up like that uwu

The only thing I could suggest is to add parts of her cutiemark. i see that it would be obstructed by her wing but i think parts of it might poke out along the sides of it ^~^

Edited June 1 by Street Light

[Snow 8,312]

On 2025-06-01 at 11:09 PM, Street Light said:

The only thing I could suggest is to add parts of her cutiemark. i see that it would be obstructed by her wing

I tell you I was being nothing but lazy 

Poor RD only has 3 legs!

 

In other news, now that NATG is on I will be trying to do all of the official EQD prompts!

Here are days 1 and 3, I buggered up Derpy’s mane and the outline on Rarity but alas these coloured pencils cannot be erased  I have to be more careful going forward!

[Street Light 345]

17 minutes ago, Snow said:

In other news, now that NATG is on I will be trying to do all of the official EQD prompts!

Here are days 1 and 3, I buggered up Derpy’s mane and the outline on Rarity but alas these coloured pencils cannot be erased  I have to be more careful going forward!

omg :3 omg omg. 

i love derpy in that pot. that's super cute, esp with that trowel >w< rarity's got a pretty sassy trot going on, too. im not much of an artist, but any time i tried to make a pony walking it always came out suuuper scuffed. idk if that's a personal skill issue or not, but i like how you did it here uwu