My first OC

[Roi 100]

So I was bored and started drawing my own OC and here is how it came out!Iknow it looks bad but tell me HONSTLY what you think -Applejacks head goes 180 degrees and looks staright at you-Thank you! .Also sorry its so small if someone can please leave a reply on who to do it ,Thanks

Edited June 17, 2012 by MLPSQUAD

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

Very good for a start here comes the criticism

-can't really tell whats going on with the mane

-hindlegs are a bit too skinny at the joint

-neck & chest need some attention (see sheet below)

-poor fellow won't be able to fly with just one wing....

-is he wearing just sleeves, or a body glove ?

 

 

 

 

looking forward to more

[Pencil Hoof 169]

Very good for a start here comes the criticism

-can't really tell whats going on with the mane

-hindlegs are a bit too skinny at the joint

-neck & chest need some attention (see sheet below)

-poor fellow won't be able to fly with just one wing....

-is he wearing just sleeves, or a body glove ?

 

 

 

 

looking forward to more

 

This is a great comment! I agree with everything he said, including the part about looking forward to more!

Heck I even stole that picture

[Roi 100]

Thanks.I'll start working on that.I did draw this very guickly.Thanks for the reply Edited June 16, 2012 by MLPSQUAD

[Pencil Hoof 169]

Thanks.I'll start working on that.I did draw this very guickly.Thanks for the reply

 

No problem!

I have to start working on my pony drawings this summer as well

I guess I start in a week and a bit

We could race each other in a cnotest progress! XD

[Chill Mists (Chilly) 801]

Very good, I think the mane could use a bit of work but I like the rest. :3.

[Roi 100]

Thanks for the reply .Iam gonna draw him better soon. Thanks again

[silverguard101 8]

is this freehand? cuz if so this is really good. even if its not freehand its still really good.

[Roi 100]

Not sure what free hand means but Thanks for the nice reply

[Pencil Hoof 169]

Not sure what free hand means but Thanks for the nice reply

 

It means not traced

[Roi 100]

Oh no this was not traced iam horrid with art knowledge i just go with what looks good to me Thanks for the kind words

[silverguard101 8]

Oh no this was not traced iam horrid with art knowledge i just go with what looks good to me Thanks for the kind words

 

still pretty good if your horrid with art knowledge. lol im not the best with art either. lol