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[nonee 130]

I was just messing around with drawing my OC trying to get a look to him that I liked a bit more and this is what I came up with. Random position and changed him to a unicorn lol Not really sure if I'm happy with this drawing or not so any criticism would be a big help

Also went back, colored him and made a few changes with GIMP.

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

Looking good, especially the colouring

-unicorn horns tend to lean appr. 45° forard so just angle it a bit

-the underside of the right front hoof needs sems to have a dent

-the upper part of the left frontleg needs straightening

-the right hindleg is in a really tricky position to draw, I'd suggest just putting the seatcushion in front of the underside

-the outlines on mane and tail are a tad too thin and some of the manetips need cleaning up

-the outlinne of the eye needs to be in front of the reflection dot

 

I hope you're still planning on adding the glasses

[False Perception 482]

Looking good, especially the colouring AGREED!

-unicorn horns tend to lean appr. 45° forard so just angle it a bit I disagree, I feel it looks natural.

-the underside of the right front hoof needs sems to have a dent AGREED!

-the upper part of the left frontleg needs straightening I feel that it's angled awkwardly.

-the right hindleg is in a really tricky position to draw, I'd suggest just putting the seatcushion in front of the underside I feel it's perfect.

-the outlines on mane and tail are a tad too thin and some of the manetips need cleaning up I didn't notice this, but looking back, for it to look more like the show, he's right.

-the outlinne of the eye needs to be in front of the reflection dot Not following you here.

 

I hope you're still planning on adding the glasses AGREED!

 

I give you my hoof, sir.

[nonee 130]

Looking good, especially the colouring

-unicorn horns tend to lean appr. 45° forard so just angle it a bit

-the underside of the right front hoof needs sems to have a dent

-the upper part of the left frontleg needs straightening

-the right hindleg is in a really tricky position to draw, I'd suggest just putting the seatcushion in front of the underside

-the outlines on mane and tail are a tad too thin and some of the manetips need cleaning up

-the outlinne of the eye needs to be in front of the reflection dot

 

I hope you're still planning on adding the glasses

 

I give you my hoof, sir.

 

Thank y'all a ton! The advice helped out a lot

Edited June 25, 2012 by Broken Image