Pegasistersincethe80s 126 July 8, 2012 Share July 8, 2012 Now,it's been 15 years since I've drawn,I was so excited to get it on paper that I didn't do the proportions quite right. Be gentle. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406 July 8, 2012 Share July 8, 2012 Alright, I do not intend to be rude in this review. The facial features are preetty off. Her head looks... Previous Generation. Now with size, she seems to be a little chubby. I don't know if this was intended or not, but... yeah. Another thing about the head. It is too close to the body. Usually, necks are longer. This seems a little small. The wings are too close to her head, next time drawing you should keep in mind the distance that is between head and wing. Lastly, some of the legs seem a little odd in appearance. You may wanna work on that. But 15 years since you've drawn?! This is quite the feat, then. I HAD TO FALL TO LOSE IT ALL BUT IN THE END IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER /WRISTS On 4/28/2013 at 8:13 PM, gooM said: Djenty...man you are crazy, but an awesome sort of crazy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasistersincethe80s 126 July 8, 2012 Author Share July 8, 2012 (edited) So I guess "be gentle" was lost on you?I did say I did a rush job and the proportions were going to be off.She's chubby because I'm chubby and I made her nose bigger because mine is. And this is just a first draft. I took a lot more time on this one, I didn't color it. This is a 2nd draft Edited July 8, 2012 by Pegasistersincethe80s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hazardus_Havard. 479 July 8, 2012 Share July 8, 2012 So I guess "be gentle" was lost on you?I did say I did a rush job and the proportions were going to be off.She's chubby because I'm chubby and I made her nose bigger because mine is. And this is just a first draft. I took a lot more time on this one, I didn't color it. This is a 2nd draft I prefer this image to the top one. They closely resemble the G3 ponies (when they animated them properly) I love the use of hair drawn on it, makes it much more lively. There really isn't much to criticize on the second picture. Just need to color this up and clean it a bit, maybe you should consider digitally fixing it through something like GIMP. 1 Practice makes perfect; but if nobody's perfect, why practice? http://hazardus-havard.deviantart.com/ Art http://www.fimfiction.net/story/70801/an-alien-walks-amongst-us Story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasistersincethe80s 126 July 8, 2012 Author Share July 8, 2012 (edited) When I compare the 1st to 2nd, I see how much better taking the time to do it right made it. The first one was just a hurry and up and draw your idea, the 2nd was a make it look more Gen 4 and get everything in the right proportions. I like the result much better. I'll draw out a final draft and digitally fix it up. Edited July 8, 2012 by Pegasistersincethe80s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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