Jet Blue, a random OC

[Rudehamster 156]

I was doodling a bit, and this came out, what you think? Her name is Jet Blue, she loves going fast, is outgoing, loves making friends, but can be very clumsy. She has a fascination with magic, and is way to curious for her own good.

[Agent Scrubs 80]

At first I was thinking of the airline, but then read the rest of the title. Great drawing!!

[Nightfall 3,950]

At first I was thinking of the airline, but then read the rest of the title. Great drawing!!

 

My first thought was, "Will she get fired if she has a melt-down?"

 

Well done!

Edited July 9, 2012 by Nightfall

[Finesthour 7,287]

My critique:

• The hair is... I cannot put my finger on what exactly is wrong with it, it just looks very odd. The lines are oddly mishapen at points, and very narrow. It doesn't seem very natural at all.
• The highlites however look very nice, and save the hair's unnatrualness.
• The wings are spot on. Not many can do the wings right, so points added for you.
• The hooves seem... to small. Almost bony.
• The tail looks very odd, like the mane.
• The background fits quite nicely with the pony.
• ...Where is your pony's puple? She looks like an alien, dead, cold, staring eyes without a pupil to see.
• Her nose is not rounded enough, giving her once again, an alien look.
• Her mouth is rather small, and her nose is only a dot.

This is a nice drawing for a doodle, but I would keep practicing.

2.5/5