Lindy Hopping!

[Random User 249]

So yeah some swing dancing pony OCs. The one on the left is mine, the one on the right is another friend who requested I draw this.

 

So yeah, the 1940's.

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My critique:

• Quite the stylized drawing you got here.
• These ponies... look nothing like ponies, save the tails and colors.
• Ther hooves look like the arms necromorphs have.
• Their feet do not look like hooves either.
• The mane and tails I really enjoy.
• Neither have pupils. Death stares all around.
• They have really awkward bodies for ponies, the one on the right specifically. Her hips are... uneven.

Not a bad picture, honestly.

3/5

[Random User 249]

^Thank you for the critique. I suppose it's time to ditch pointed forehooves. I've done that twice so far and both time I was told they didn't look well.

 

The "feet" look a lot better on paper. I'm not the best with outlining digitally and whatnot, but I shall be practicing.

 

I'm unsure how you mean awkward, but the hips might just be because I was going for a sort of bend that would cause her to appear to be swinging.

[Finesthour 7,289]

 

I'm unsure how you mean awkward, but the hips might just be because I was going for a sort of bend that would cause her to appear to be swinging.

 

It honestly looked like she broke her hip and she was bending over.