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Your outlining comes of WAY too strongly here. Try using a color similar to the body it's outlining but have a darkened variation to that; it should help that problem out.

 

And you highlights in the eyes are a bit too small. Make them a bit bigger. And the coloring in the eye. There should probably be a bit more since it looks like one big black eye with some color and it doesn't help your figure here a whole lot.


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http://hazardus-havard.deviantart.com/

 

Art

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/70801/an-alien-walks-amongst-us

 

Story

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