open This can't end well.

[Cherry Blossom 864]

She just kept cry and crying. Of course she was only 20 so she didn't want to die so early. "Why did I have to die now?! I could've had such a wonderful life! I would've taken first chair of the symphony, get married and have kids, but why?!" She continued to cry.

[null123456 759]

Linus stared at Octavinyl. ''Don't do this now.. I'm sad enough already!'' Linus said. ''I'm stuck in Happy Hell.. What could be worse than that?!'' Linus said.

[The Razor Wing 879]

And now you can begin your change Linus. You have done something you have never shown another pony. Sympathy. Now you can start your journey to find your way out of hell. Light forms on Linus over his heart. And we begin.

[Senor Citizen 516]

The brown pony shows up again with another couple of broadcasts.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=wILdZHykr54

He seems almost amused by your confusion, and makes his exit without dropping any hints. How inconvenient.

[null123456 759]

''Okay.. This is just getting weird.'' Linus said while staring at the brown pony. ''I'M LOSING MY DAMN MIND!'' Linus said while he began to sweat. ''Are there any therapists in hell? I need one.'' Linus said.

[The Razor Wing 879]

'Are there any therapists in hell? I need one.''

What do you think im here for? Im the only one here who can help you. You just need to do what you never did when you were alive. You already have one key that can get you out of here. Just be a better pony than you were on earth.

[Cherry Blossom 864]

Octavinyl stopped crying but she remained silent and looked down still feeling upset. "What did I do wrong? Why do I deserve this fate?" She thought to herself as she continued to feel saddness kick in.

[The Razor Wing 879]

Voice speaks to Octavinyl

Poor child you misunderstand. The power of life and death was in your hands.

You knew it would happen, you saw as it came. You knew the price of your fortune and fame.

For when you make it to the top all you can do is look down. And sometimes our success can weigh us down.

Hahahahahahahaha

Voice fades

[null123456 759]

''Better Pony? No way.. Surge. I'm not doing that! I'm perfect the way I am!'' Linus said. Ehhh.. SHUT UP! Okay! ''So.. Surge. Can I leave yet?'' Linus said. He had been smiling widely.

[The Razor Wing 879]

No. You have only learned one lesson so far. There is one lesson per pony here and that includes yourself. Only you can lead them to salvation or damnation. That also means the voice in your head. So whats it going to be?

[discorded 234]

No Linus this is your hell, not theirs. They are stuck in a place where they must find the truth of why the died. They have to let go of their natural body and except their death. You on the other hoof are stuck here till i see fit.

 

Jacob said "Surge you said that once I accept my death I can leave this place, Where will I go once I accept that I died. After I let go of my natural body what will happen." Edited August 12, 2012 by giordano

[The Razor Wing 879]

Once you let go your soul will be in Linus's hooves. He will ether have to feel your pain and learn a lesson, or reject you and let you wonder here in this void for eternity. But his choice also effects him as well. He has learned one lesson and thats how to feel others pain. But all in all your pain must become his pain.

And im suppose to be telling you this but once you let go and he feels your pain you all will be give a choice. To ether move on to your afterlife or be sent back to a time before you died and try to fix it. Because all of you here died wrongfully.....Accept for you Linus. Your death was coming to you.

[null123456 759]

''Why was it coming for ME?'' Linus said while frowning. ''The Others must have died for a reason as well! I mean.. All I did was slaughter a bunch of Celestia's Troopers!'' Linus said. His face Shrunk. ''Oh. That's why.'' Linus said.

[Opalicious 799]

Bumble was confused by Surge. She didn't remember dying, therefore had absolutely know way of being here. She could be in a coma, but she didn't remember anything that could lead up to that either. "Hey, Surge, explain to us why none of us can remember dying," she shouted.

[The Razor Wing 879]

Looking at Bumble as she was not completely there but somewhat faded. That is strange. I have not had many cases like you before. But when i do they all go back to there bodies. I think you child are having an out of body experience. You are here to tell the world that there is something after death. Come with me child, You have much to learn.

[Opalicious 799]

Bumble raised her eyebrow. She didn't know if she could trust him or not, but she was her only chance of getting back to her body. Either that, or the pony would do something to her. Then again, not like she was content at the moment anyway. "Alright, I'll go along. But don't try doing anything to me." It sounded like a petty warning, but it was the best she could do before trotting over to the pony.

[Cherry Blossom 864]

"I can have a chance to get my life back if he learns these lessons and becomes different?" Octavinyl asked with a look of hope go over her face. She walked over to Linus and held onto his forelegs, "I must have my life back!"

[null123456 759]

''Don't Rush me!'' Linus said. ''It takes me about 10 days to learn a lesson.. So You'll be stuck here for a while.'' Linus said. ''Or we can all just jump in the candy river and drown?'' Linus said.

[The Razor Wing 879]

Looks at Octavinyl. Keep calm child. He has learned the lesson for you. You were his first lesson. When you told him your story and who you were on earth he felt your pain. Thats why his chest started to glow. So he feels your pain. And Bubmle you must tell Linus story and how he saved these souls.

[null123456 759]

''What? My chest was glowing? That sounds awesome.'' Linus said. ''Okay, Bumble. Time for me to learn your story.'' Linus said while sitting in front of Bumble. ''So..?'' Linus said while cocking an eyebrow.

[The Razor Wing 879]

No idiot shes here to tell your story. She not fully dead, just having an out of body experience. Go help one of the others find out why they died. So get to talking man you got souls to save. And a heaven to get into. It is much better than this. It has mares that arunt your mom.

[Opalicious 799]

Bumble was now genuinely confused, she had no idea how she was going to present her story. She barely knew it herself! She dug deep into her memories, trying to get hold of something she could at least begin with. Not remembering anything, she turned back. "I'm sorry, I don't have anything to tell. I don't really know what has happened earlier in my life before...well, this."

[The Razor Wing 879]

Oh forget it! I give up on all of you. Ill come back when you understand what i was talking about. But for now im just going to go and chill in the Farplains. Ill let the other voices talk to you. And yes Linus i mean the ones you first met. The ones that rime all the time. See you ponies later. Have a nice after life. Explodes away. Edited August 13, 2012 by Razorwing58